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Legacy. I get the feeling that this story probably won't end well for most of the characters. Despite that, I'm still very eager to read it! And I'm VERY concerned about the strange way they're treating Logan and Marie. Something very odd other than Legacy is going on here. The fact that they're keeping Logan in a coma makes NO sense. Coma patients have a LOWER immune response because the human body isn't meant to be immobile for long periods of time. They are actually decreasing their chances of success. What's even stranger is Jean's only response to Marie practically molesting her patient is "Lock the door next time."
This is a great first chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I've just found all the reviews you've left, thank you!
I've gone back and re-read the 'lock the door next time' part, it is a little ambiguous I've realised, sorry, that wasn't Jean picking up what she had been doing, that was Rogue having a mini panic attack at almost getting caught and resolving to lock the door next time.
It was a great start, i'm waiting to see what happen in the next chapter, keep going!