As a member of the 'Yeah, Iceman is kinda cool' *ducks* O.O erm.. group. I would like to say this is a refreshing take on him, he is very much the hero of this story. Marie is one lucky little lady, aside from her husband dying of cancer, of course. Two men are comppletely love her and all but whorship her, two men who shouldn't be! (By that I mean Bobby being gay and Logan being loner/emotional unstable) But I feel so bad for Logan. He's just five minutes late for each bus stop, isn't he? The ending also feels, that, well, things will not be going well for those two in the future. Like they'll be together but just because they feel like they should. Anywho! It was depressing but very good and different.

Look forward to more War! *cough*AlteredVision*coughcough* O:)

Author's Response: War is on my to-do list right now. Altered Vision is... Eh... Erm... Is... Let's just forget it for now... :) And thanks for the fb. Hmm... I have been toying with the idea of the epilogue. I don't see their future as grim as you do, so if I write it, you may be in for a surprise.