“No, you’re the worst case scenario.” He really is.

"He was a little off, earlier. Xavier doesn’t have it in him to brainwash kids into soldiers, true, but evangelizing them into X-Men isn’t as different as the old man probably likes to think." Loved this line. There have been plenty of stories w/ the theme of Prof X manipulating kids to be X-Men one way or another, but I've never come across this particular view. I like it.

I totally dug the Annie reference too.

I'm also digging the action & how you went about incorporating Magneto's machine in your universe.

So so so so so glad you updated this. I'm breaking one of my rules & reading this on my work computer because I couldn't wait 12 hours. I figured I'd try & review every chapter too even though it's all done. On to the next one!