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Date: 02/03/2011 9:17:44 PM Title: An honest tale speeds best, being plainly told
So first things first, the reason you feel like you ran a marathon is because you did. This chapter had huge emotional reveals in it. I think more so then the previous chapters because we, the readers, knew Logan, Jubliee and Kitty wouldn't hurt Marie even if Marie didn't. Marie's back story, however, is completely open and the amount of blackness in it is completely up to you. Hence both our level of anxiety and your level of exhaustion.
Secondly this is going to sound pervse but I adore the idea that Marie killed Cody. It is a fresh idea on a 'story' we know very well. Even more fresh is the idea that because she took all of him, his presence changes and matures with her. Really cool.
I am looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2011 5:57:42 PM Title: An honest tale speeds best, being plainly told
Very good story! You're showing some originality here, making Marie's story all your own with Arkansan origins, and having her actually KILL Cody instead of just hurt him.
I bet the last person is one of her parents, right??
Author's Response: Well, she already picked up her dad... and I'll let you see if you can figure our who number four is.Either way, you'll find out eventually. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2011 4:08:27 PM Title: An honest tale speeds best, being plainly told
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Date: 02/03/2011 3:24:04 PM Title: An honest tale speeds best, being plainly told
squeee! so glad you updated!
Date: 02/03/2011 12:04:58 PM Title: An honest tale speeds best, being plainly told
number four? uh oooo...
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2011 11:05:22 AM Title: An honest tale speeds best, being plainly told
Not to be insulting, but I've mostly been indifferent to this story up to this point, nut this chapter made me a die-hard fan. Beautifully intricate with enough details to flesh out the back-story. More, please!
Author's Response: I'm not insulted in the least. Not every story is for everyone, which is why there are so many different authors of published works out there. I'm glad that this chapter caught your interest though. Thanks for reviewing!