Reviews For To Touch the Moon
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Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 9:59:28 PM Title: Chapter 8: Retribution

oooo burn! very nice

Author's Response: Thank you...Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 3:47:16 PM Title: Chapter 8: Retribution

I'm enjoying the progression of this story, and your characterizations are pretty spot-on. But I wish you hadn't written Marie outing Bobby; that's just not cool, and it left a bad taste in my mouth.

Author's Response: Sorry, that upset you, the good news is that by-gones are by-gones soon. After all they will have to work as a team...Thanks for the review I really want to do well with the characters.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2011 3:43:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: Retribution

Ah, Professor...Too bed you are dead already. And "cat piss"? Touch of genius. Poor Bobby...Poor, poor Bobby (snickers). And enter Gambit!!!! My second favorite male X men!!! Woohoooooo!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I have to admit I had to go to the bad place to get that section done. I had to end things with snow-boy and kitty-litter but I wanted to be able to do it in such a way that said you can't hurt me, but make it clear she was hurt and she wanted a pound of flesh to make it right. I am glad you are looking forward to Gambit...I almost asked for a vote of whether to add him or not, but said screw it I want Remy!

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