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[Report This]Date: 07/07/2011 7:38:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
:-O oooh What's going on there then? xXx
Author's Response: You'll just have to read the next chapter and find out ;)
Date: 07/07/2011 12:47:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh very interesting. I love that Marie has Carol caged up. Shouldn't Logan be running around in Marie and Rogue's head too? Is he quiet because she is with the real Logan?
Date: 07/07/2011 9:35:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Stupid fucking healing factor
Oh man, ain't that the truth? I loved the struggle between Marie and Carol - Carol would be very dominant - and man, you got me all kinds of freaked out with Logan going all "Wolverine- y" on poor Marie! What's he going to do now, now that Marie has made an appearance...
Love your updates, keep it going!!!! :)
Author's Response: Dominant ain't the half of it ;). And I will absolutely keep the updates coming.... although I do take the GRE in two weeks (blegh!) so don't be surprised to see a slight lull until that's over.
Date: 07/07/2011 1:47:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
This line was just amazing: The anger left him in one big rush, claws winnowing through the muscles of his forearms as they slid in.
And so intriguing, with the personalities! You are an awesome updater, but you can't possibly update fast enough for me!
Author's Response: Aw thanks. I hope the personalities become a lot more interesting. Especially the love quadrangle between Logan and Marie and Rogue and Wolverine :). Fun stuff.
Date: 07/06/2011 11:55:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh very interesting. I love that Marie has Carol caged up. Shouldn't Logan be running around in Marie and Rogue's head too? Is he quiet because she is with the real Logan?
Author's Response: Well, I was thinking Rogue didn't absorb enough of him to last more than a couple of weeks. He was only out for 20 hours, after all :P.
Date: 07/06/2011 10:03:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ole boy! I knew Marie would make an appearance. Yea! I can understand why she'd be frightened of Logan right then, he was over the top with trying to show Rogue he was the dominate one, and that it wasn't nice push him to far. However, I hope Marie gets some steel in her backbone and faces Logan head on. Like she did with Carol.
I think Logan went a tiny bit to far with his act though and I'm glad he felt the shame of his actions.
I hope Logan will find a mate in Marie, like he did Rogue. And I hope Marie learns to trust and love Logan, even his more feral side the Wolverine. I am so loving this story so far. I can't wait to see what you've got cooked up for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Heh :). I'm sorry to say it's not an especially long appearance. But don't worry, she'll be back. And as far as the love . . . umm triangle? Quadrangle? Between Marie and Rogue and Logan and Wolverine--well, that's bound to get really complicated. And messy. And fun.
Date: 07/06/2011 9:05:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
dun dun dunnnnn!!!! hooray for quick updates! marie made it, im so happy.
Author's Response: Lol yeah. I know it's kinda cheesy, but I just had to cut it off there and get that 'dun dun dunnnnn' moment. I read too many Tom Clancy novels ;P.
[Report This]Date: 07/06/2011 7:36:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter. My only complaint? CHAPTER TOO SHORT. WOE.
BTW: there's a comma here where there should be a period:
His voice was still scratchy with emotion,
But that's a wee little mistake.
Author's Response: Ugh, I know. I was really trying to make every chapter 2500-4000 words, but so far I think there are going to be two really short ones, and one that's much longer. Oh well. And thanks for pointing out my slip-up, Captain Grammar. Will fix posthaste! :P