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[Report This]Date: 08/02/2011 5:19:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter is just awesome. You are a maestro with the sexual tension. There is more sexuality in the barest touch in your story than in a lot of fics where Rogan are banging like bunnies. ;-) This part in particular was very nice:
She made no attempt to answer. Her fingers ghosted over his lips, making him shake. The barely-there drag of silk seemed to heighten all of his senses. Little flashes of pleasure seared through him, growing stronger and stronger with every pass of her fingers—and suddenly it was too much. His hips bucked and he bit down on her.
Author's Response: Heh. Maestro. I like that. I do think that people often underestimate the power of a simple touch, skim over or flat-out ignore moments that could be drawn out a little bit and savored. I mean that both in real life and in writing, of course! Sensuality doesn't have to mean sex. Though make no mistake; there will be sex. Those scenes have already practically written themselves. :P.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2011 9:22:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Man.
I am just aching for them - Logan for desperately wanting her to reach out to him (love the whole, "tell me to stop" )while Rogue desperately needing to touch him. The bit about the shoelaces?
Heartbreaking.
And holy cow - Rogue is one freaky b*tch, lol! The Wolverine has met his match!
:)Can't wait for the next installment. :)
Author's Response: Ugh, I am aching for them too. Everytime I write them, they just want to throw themselves at each other. It's a struggle to pull them apart and keep some semblance of a plot, LOL.
Date: 07/11/2011 8:32:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
hehe i loved this chapter! i can't believe rogue cracked logan's spine and crushed his hand.
Author's Response: She's stronger than she realizes :)
Date: 07/10/2011 10:25:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. I wonder when Rogue is going to start talking at least to Logan some. Can't wait to find out. Poor Rogue, having flashes of being attacked is hard. I hope Logan understands that, while helping her to overcome. Poor Logan too. Wanting her, but forcing his own instincts back until she's herself again, and can tell him what she wants. I am loving this story so much. Can't wait for my next fix. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I've had to go out of town and have a big test next Saturday (yick) but after that hope to grind out this story with frequent updates!