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[Report This]Date: 08/02/2011 5:26:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Another great chapter. I like Scott and all but the real star of this chapter for me was the calm, authoritative interactions between Wolverine and Rogue, like this:
He just raised an eyebrow at her tantrum. “I see it. But you know he didn’t mean to invade your territory. Now stop fussing.”
You also do a really great job of portraying how confusing it is for Feral!Rogue when someone's verbal and nonverbal cues don't match.
Author's Response: I liked the dynamic there too. Glad to see someone else enjoyed it :). It's great to go back and skim over these chapters and see your feedback. It's really helping me get grounded in the story again, ready to move forward with a nice clear vision of where these characters have been and where they need to go. So thanks for that.
Date: 07/19/2011 9:27:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, well, I don't mind the lovey-dovey stuff much.
"all his confusing Jedi proverb bullshit" that much made me LOL. Great stuff, can't wait to read what's coming next. :)
Author's Response: Glad you've enjoyed the story so far. I'm a fan of the lovey-dovey too, but I did promise action, and gosh darnit I'm gonna deliver as soon as the mushy romantic muses quit takin' over every chapter :P
Date: 07/15/2011 6:09:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
I like the idea of having the inhabitants of Rogue's mind "live" in the mansion and come out occasionally. I'd like to see more of Marie, she seems sweet and glad you got the lovey dovey stuff out becuase I'm ready for more action!
Also, my favorite line in this story has to be poor Scott lamenting his Motorcycle hahaha.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There is definitely more Marie to come! :)
Date: 07/13/2011 6:33:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yah!!!!
Author's Response: Inorite!! :P
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2011 10:44:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Now look what you've done - you've got me eyeballing your Scott with a litte more interest than Logan with this chapter. I have no problem shoving Jean out of the way to adjust that tie of his RIGHT OFF....
*ahem*...moving on now...
I really enjoyed you having Scott bring up that Rogue typically takes on the personas of the people she absorbs and that being the basis for his interest in whats happening - it validates his concern in regards to Rogue being in seclusion with Logan. Interesting too how your story has Logan's original mutation only being his healing factor and that his feralness was brought on by the Weapon X program. That's why I love this site - the ideas that srping out of the minds of the amazingly talented writers here is simply addicting, which your story is.
I can't wait for my next fix! :)
Author's Response: Um yeah. Movie Scott is a boyish little dousche who looks absolutely ridiculous with a gorgeous woman like Jean, ya know? Just felt like I had to rectify that in fic haha. As for the feralness brought on by the Weapon X program, not really sure where that came from. But it does tie in well with an upcoming subplot, so joy :P. Next fix incoming ASAP.
Date: 07/12/2011 2:08:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really loved this chapter, I didn't expect to with it starting out with Scott butting in, but the conversation between he and Logan had to happen. I don't think this was overly lovey dovey either.
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks. That's great to know, as I was a little reluctant to return to Scott's POV as well. But as you said, it had to happen.
Date: 07/12/2011 1:42:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Such a great chapter! I have to say I'm proud of Scott. This is one of the few stories that was more serious, that had Scott not hating and always jealous and fighting Logan. I really like how Scott is protective of Rogue, but also realizing Logan is the better man to help her right now. Bravo Scott!
Aww Logan is in love. It's about time he let his heart reach out to someone else, and not just his lust. I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the great writing.
Author's Response: Thanks. I think Scott was woefully dousche-ified in the movies, and have no problem trying to rectify that in fic. Glad it came through well. Next update ASAP