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[Report This]Date: 08/14/2011 2:20:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
“I don’t want you to take those off. Never, baby, never.”
She remembered Carol’s words: a dog collar.
And there was a part of her mind that wanted nothing more than to wear it for him. Logan had trained his pet well.
How bloody hot is THAT?! Another awesome chapter - love how the relationship is building between Logan and Marie. Very real, very much two people jostling for understanding. But that ending? Hee, hee, you are just evil.
Love the "What happens in Vermont, Stays in Vermont." :) Funny lady!
Author's Response: Okay. I thought it was pretty damn hot, too. Glad to see we're on the same page, hee. And that is the absolute perfect phrase to describe where they're at right now, "two people jostling for understanding." Although Marie's perspective on those tags and just what they mean is going to shift as her relationship with Logan evolves :).
[Report This]Date: 08/14/2011 12:16:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh, it was going so well for Logan at the end and then she had to mention the bellman. sigh
I really love this story. And I'm so glad that you're now going to work more on the Logan/Marie aspect (as opposed to the Rogue/Logan/Wolverine aspect). I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review. The Logan/Marie aspect is definitely going to get come to the forefront in all sorts of interesting and complicated ways, especially once they get thrown back into life at the mansion. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :).
Date: 08/13/2011 10:31:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
Uh oh...
Author's Response: I know, right? It was disturbingly tempting to actually have Logan tear into the poor guy and then teach Marie a rather vicious lesson--but I didn't wanna go all angsty with it ;P. Maybe I'll do a redux once this story's finished, explore some of those alternate possibilities.
[Report This]Date: 08/12/2011 11:13:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yeah, I'm guessing that little mantra won't last long. ;) Great update. Like seeing Marie and Rogue integrating and I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you're liking the integration. It's been slow-going deciding how to handle her dialogue and inner thoughts, how to gradually make that transition from immature Marie to the confident grown-up Rogue we saw at the beginning of the story--I hope I'm able to do it justice and bring the readers along on the ride!
Date: 08/12/2011 10:07:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love the update. I like how you are addressing Marie's skin, and how Logan is reevaluated if he can handle it. Very tough and touching choices. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks. They are tough issues to work through--Logan's relative immortality and Marie's relative untouchability. Those are serious hurdles to overcome, and while I'm not gonna go all angsty with this story, it seems unrealistic to just gloss over everything. But hey, they'll work through it eventually :)