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[Report This]Date: 10/22/2011 10:12:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Had to page back to see where I last reviewed...so sorry for lagging behind so much. This chapter was so intriguing! Poor Logan, how disconcerting it must be to have these clues to his past dangled in front of him.
Author's Response: Oh, hey, no problem. Thanks for taking the time to review! Especially when you're busily working on your own awesome story =D.
Date: 09/20/2011 9:47:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
I stayed up until 3:30am reading this, lol. I love the Feral aspect of this. As traumatizing as it all is for the characters, it's totally one of my favorite tropes that I don't think I could pull of right so that I haven't even tried to write one. That said, I was disappointed when Marie integrated herself with Rogue and totally mucked it all up with her conscious decision making and real girl feelings. *pouts* And now she's totally trying to make Rogue bow to her and is being just a little bit of a bitch about not even thinking about Logan being in the same boat as her.
But it's improving, because they can't stand other people even looking at each others. (Let this in no way imply that I'm not happy with it, though the lack of a feral lovefest is driving me a bit wacky. *grin*) I'm excited to read the rest and badger you for more when I'm finished. Hopefully I won't keep reading it until the wee hours of the sleep and end of getting only four hours of sleep after this. *grin* Great stuff!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the feral aspect, since it's going to play a major role throughout the whole story. As for Marie integrating, I had mixed feelings about it too, but there will still be times when her feral side--not to mention Logan's--comes to the forefront. I figured it made sense for these things to kind of run on a cycle and be influenced by their natural biorhythms, that is next month they're going to go through the same insanity LOL. On that note, sorry for interfering with your sleep patterns, heh, I know how that goes.
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2011 11:24:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
“I need ya to stay calm, baby, ‘cause I need to stay calm. Got it?” Right out of the gate with that one. Perfect. And then there's this:
One who stole his heart without a single word—yet who was now growing farther from him with every second of silence. Oh boy. You are making my heart break for him now...
Just a little side note, up here in Canada, we don't say "soda", we say "pop" (usually, not always) so interesting to learn about Marie's reaction to the phrase "do you want a pop?" Good to know to ask for soda when down south :). Now on the rest of my review:
It’s a double. And I’m thinkin’ I’m gonna get a decent night’s sleep, so long as ya don’t go crawlin’ into bed with me again.” Logan, you ASSHOLE! Love it...
“I’d prefer some quality literary journals. But anything’s better than those trashy beach reads she keeps on her nightstand. I’m an editor, for God’s sake. Burn them. Please.” Halelujah. :)
Marie stiffened when he reached beneath her collar, but he just pulled the chain from under her shirt. His eyes never left hers as he brought the metal tags to his lips and kissed them before letting them drop. Oh my. Jerk Logan and Sweet Logan. And Marie gets to have both?! Lucky girl - and lucky us - for yet another, well written chapter. I am savouring every word. :)
Author's Response: See, that's so funny to me 'cause we say soda, or coke for any soft drink. (As in 'I'll have a coke.' 'What kind?' 'Dr. Pepper.') The words 'You want a pop?' are something many a Southern child would cringe at, usually a prelude to a smack on the ass, arm, leg, or any other available body part, usually because said child is acting up in the grocery store or something. I'm not sure how the idea arose to use it as a plot device, but eh, I think it turned out kinda cool and highlights Marie's Mississippi roots. Also her general hang-ups about children, which should become more apparent over the course of the story.
Yes. I loved that asshole!Logan moment too. He's so smooth sometimes, and puts his foot right in his mouth at others.
Date: 08/22/2011 6:45:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Mind-boggingly delicious; I so love this exploration of the 'feral side'.
Thank you very much for sharing it with us!
I love the explo
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! "Mind-boggingly delicious" Heh. That's possibly the coolest compliment my writing has ever gotten. I'm glad you're liking the story.
Date: 08/22/2011 3:15:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hana... poor Carol. Stuck with all those romance novels, not to mention Erik.
Great, as always. I loved their interaction with Neil and Becca though it pains me to know that he thinks like that about mutants and that Marie's actions added to his feelings. And poor Marie. Trying to stand on her own and not knowing when to lean on someone else.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, Carol's had some shit luck. But things will get better for her in the end. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Especially since I am so enjoying yours :)
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2011 7:40:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
"I won't hurt you, Marie," he said solemnly.
::melts::
Awwwww, they're sooooo adorable. And- EEK!!! Carol knows about his past?!? Can't wait for the next chapter of this great story!
Author's Response: Yeah, they are pretty adorable. I've messed around quite a bit with the timelines concerning Logan and Carol's history, and also Rogue's age relative to the other X-men--but then again, so has Marvel. Hopefully it'll all work out into an interesting subplot :). Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/21/2011 7:40:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ooh, love the new update. Very compelling. Can't wait for the next one. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I won't keep ya waiting long.
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2011 5:31:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Marie and Logan are in for a heck of a ride!
Author's Response: Thanks! They sure are. I just hope I can pull it all together. This story's so twisty turny, I tend to lose track of where the characters are, and how they're developing along with the plot, especially since I'm working on a zillion other things right now. Oh well, hopefully it comes together okay :). Thanks for reading