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Date: 08/25/2011 10:46:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh wow. Very hot. It was only a matter of time, wasn't it? Hopefully they'll figure out a way out. Great job.
Date: 08/24/2011 2:44:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
I just found this story and I love it!
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 1:58:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Absolutely loving this,Take-charge!Rogue is my favorite.
Date: 08/23/2011 6:34:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
If you ignore where they are and what happened to Rogue it's totally hot...
Author's Response: Yup, but that's going to be coming up soon.
Date: 08/23/2011 4:17:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
I just re read and have a couple more comments. Your use of present tense was a bit distracting. It felt a little like someone narrating the scene rather than them living it.
And the use of the word, buckle. Clearly you meant "bucked" but you wrote buckle. it was a little confusing at first till i figured out that it was a word error.
Author's Response: Yeah I always liked jumping back and forth with how a story is told ;) And my story isn't beta read so sometimes I don't notice my errors. Thanks for the feed backs its appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 4:08:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ok am I wrong to think that was hot? LOL cause, seriously, that was hot. I am still trying to figure out what this Dr's agenda is. I am really loving this so far. More please!
Author's Response: That Doc certainly is a creeper!