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[Report This]Date: 10/22/2011 10:20:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Such a great chapter. You do an amazing job with dialogue. I love the "sleepy speech," and all your "Grrhs,' and "Nghhhs"...in all your stories -- so deliciously sexy. “Grrmph. This dialogue was great: "Yer in m’bed. Cr’wled in w’me.”
I loved this little detail too: The neat script he never remembered learning filled the page.
Author's Response: Ha! I'm glad you like the dialogue. I try not to be too colloquial or strange with spellings, but sleepy grumpy-bear Logan was just too cute to resist.
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2011 11:39:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
“Logan was right,” she muttered sleepily.
“Always,” he grumbled in her ear. Oh. My. God. There went my coffee, all over the keyboard and screen. Freakin' AWESOME!
She felt another nip at her neck. “Shut up. Sleep w’me.”
Well then. Einstein quality delivery. You are a master. Couldn't help but feel a little sorry for Logan with the waste of a gloriously *ahem* well, YOU KNOW...
He ripped it off, along with the next two sheets that carried impressions, folded them neatly and stuck them in his leather jacket’s inner pocket. You clever girl. Nice way of showing his ingrained stealthiness!
And if ever I was hooked on this story before, it has multiplied immeasurably with this latest chapter. To heck with school woman, focus on Feral only (although any more side stories would be more than appreciated!)
I hope you've got the next chapter ready for posting - and yes, yes - I am irrationally expecting another one despite devouring these past three like a glutton! :) Knowing what to look forward to is only whetting my appetite!
Author's Response: Hee. Sorry for wreckin' your comp, dear! I'm glad Logan's brusque 'Shut up' didn't come across as too harsh. He's a grumpy bear ;). So glad you enjoyed the chapter. I do hope to get the next one finished quickly! Oh, btw, didn't know you were from Canada. As much as you worry about your southern-isms, I now totally worry about my northern-isms. If there's anything blatantly un-Canadian in Logan's dialogue, feel free to point it out to me. Because I wouldn't have a clue, lol.
Date: 08/25/2011 2:44:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Beautiful chapter. The feelings and imagery that I got from it were super intense. You, my dear, are talented as hell. And, though I always want more of this story, the shorter chapter didn't feel awkward at all, like they sometimes can. It followed a great arc and was a good, and necessary, step back from plot and into contemplation/character development. It worked very well!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad the chapter came off well. And 'talented as hell' is like, the coolest compliment I've ever gotten as a writer. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story, as I am very much enjoying both of yours :)
Date: 08/25/2011 12:42:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
The sleepy Logan is just toooo cute! If only he realized the depth of Marie's nightmares, the last absorption just one more horror. I have loved their time together. I am not sure I want them to get to the others.
Author's Response: Isn't sleepy Logan adorably sexy? I know a lot of people think he's a light sleeper and spends every night tossing and turning with nightmares, but I kind of think he has the capacity to hunker down like a grumpy bear if he feels comfortable enough ;). And I don't think anyone could pry his mate away if he fell asleep with her in his arms. And if it's any consolation, I wasn't sure I wanted them to get to the others either, LOL.
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2011 10:43:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
Gosh, I love this story so much. Truly, I do. It's so in-depth (both in characterization and plot) and well-written. I really can't wait to read the next installment!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and that you take the time to leave such kind reviews. I've tried to plan out the plot and character devel. as carefully as I can, but I'm sure there are minor loopholes and moments when things have gone off track, hehe. But I will do my best to keep the updates coming regularly :).
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2011 1:19:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sweet chapter. I have a feeling Marie's going to get her hands on that note and is not going to be happy with the last line. :p
Author's Response: Hehe. I think there are about a hundred ways that a confused woman with repressed memories and serious trust issues could misinterpret Logan's little note. Fun!
Date: 08/24/2011 12:22:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very nice lead in chapter. I'm glad to see that Logan restrained himself from his roaming hands. I know that Logan must be dying to find out what Carol knows, or like you said a part of him is. Love the new chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked! Yeah, poor guy. He is a man, after all, but that's some pretty admirable self-restraint :). And the Logan/Carol drama is gonna get all kinds of complicated. Hee.