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[Report This]Date: 10/22/2011 10:32:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
I just love these two characters so much. This exchange:
He gave her leg a squeeze. “This okay?”
Marie turned away from him. “It feels too . . . too much.”
He took his hand back, muttering a curse. “Sorry. Next time tell me, Marie. Don’t be scared to tell me.”
Marie had only wanted him to stop moving his thumb, not to pull away completely. But she couldn’t bring herself to explain that.
And this one:
He felt his anger flare. “Oh, it’s like that, huh? Embarrassed of me?”
To his surprise, she turned into him and placed her hand over his heart. She spoke into his chest. “No. No. I am embarrassed, but not of you..."
I love how they talk to each other, but still feel there are things that have to be held back. It's never cliche between the two of them, and I admire that immensely.
Author's Response: I like that dynamic too. I think so much of what's between them is just innate and instinctual, and they probably couldn't find the words to talk about it even if they wanted to. They just kind of have a tacit understanding about some things. At least, I hope it comes across that way =)
[Report This]Date: 09/19/2011 10:42:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
I LOVE this story!! It is such a hot read, with the who Feral aspect. I adore how you make Logan/Marie interact. I love how you make Wolverine/Rouge interact even more! Please update again soon! I cant wait to see where you take this!
Date: 09/07/2011 10:45:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
So digging this story! I'm curious to see how things shake out now that they're back at the mansion.
“We're officially home, Logan. No more of this alpha male stuff. Clean slate, remember?" Right, keep telling yourself that, LOL!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the arc of the story from here. The pace should pick up, and there will definitely be some interesting moments as they struggle with their feral sides =D.
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2011 12:41:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG, I'm just as angry as Rogue!!! ...but, dammit, I can kinda see where Scott's coming from. Grr... I hate when I understand both sides! It makes me feel so conflicted. sigh.
And I pretty much melted at this:
“Oh, baby. Why? Look, I know I maybe said the wrong things when you were talkin’ about how I’d leave you or resent you or whatever, but I just need ya to know that ain’t true. I won’t do those things. I shoulda told you that before. But you put those ideas in my head, and I started worryin’ maybe they were true—but after last night, I—I know they’re not. You gotta know that too. Don’cha feel it? How right this is, you and me? I told you I wouldn’t hurt you. So—so just trust that. Trust me.”
Loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I do think Scott has some valid points. But hey, he can't expect Rogue to be happy about having her competence questioned. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. It's almost finished. Silly classes and work and things keep cutting into my computer time. Hmph.
Date: 09/05/2011 11:46:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love where you have taken this, you moved it from a story that could have been just a quick smut fic to something that has depth and breath. They are goiong to learn different things about themselves, their feral natures, and what they can and cannot control, wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like the direction it's going. I was worried people would be upset at how slowly things are developing, but hopefully it will be worth the wait. Must confess, I've already written several of the smutty scenes. Now it's just a matter of getting the characters to that point ;).
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2011 7:16:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Dude. Scott. You can really be a patronizing dick.
Great plot developments here, and I love how Marie and Logan are learning to relate to each other. More please! :)
Author's Response: Heh. Yeah, Scott, you dick. That's exactly what Rogue thinks, too. Did you peek ahead to the next chapter or something? ;). I'm glad the plot is developing quickly enough for you. I kinda feel like the pacing on this sucks. But gah, every scene just somehow expands when I type it out, and before I know it, 4000 words are gone. I really gotta learn to be more concise. Oh well, hopefully people are enjoying the leisurely ride.
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2011 8:49:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
I feel like this story is releasing pheromones in the air, leaving me dazzed.
Author's Response: Ha, I'm glad you like the story! Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 09/04/2011 10:51:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
I just love the way you write their interactions. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the read and the review :). I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 09/04/2011 10:34:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved the new chapter. I'm eagerly waiting more. I really loved the interaction between Rogue and Logan on the drive to the mansion. I'm very curious to how alpha Logan and head strong RogueMarie are going to find a balance between them to be able to work as a couple. I hope to read more soon. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks. I had such a complicated vision for this story that I wasn't entirely sure I could pull it all together 0_o;; but it seems like things are moving in the right direction. I'm glad you've enjoyed reading so far, and hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: 09/04/2011 9:35:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
ooooooo. she returns. Can't wait for more to come!
Author's Response: Me neither! Wish damn responsibilities would quit interfering with my writing addiction, heh ;).