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[Report This]Date: 10/23/2011 6:36:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
This chapter is so ridiculously hot. Especially this line:
“Oh, God, baby, I can’t help—” he crushed her against him and licked at her lips again, a show of lust that would have been embarrassingly feral if she hadn’t whimpered and tentatively licked him back.
And this one:
“Just let me,” he muttered incoherently between kisses, “let me, darlin’, please.”
Again, I love how they talk to each other with such amazing candor. Great job!
Author's Response: If reviews were candy, I would seriously be on a sugar high right now. Yay! Thanks for taking the time to read and leave awesome feedback!
Date: 09/24/2011 9:58:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
So good! I'm loving this story and am always waiting eagerly for what's coming next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're liking the story, and sorry that updates have slowed since the start of the semester. Boo =(
Date: 09/21/2011 2:46:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hotness. Much appreciated. And drooled over. Thankee muchly.
~Mia
Date: 09/21/2011 2:46:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hotness. Much appreciated. And drooled over. Thankee muchly.
~Mia
Author's Response: Heh, thanks =). I'm glad the hotness worked for ya. More soon!
Date: 09/21/2011 12:17:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
This was a great chapter - very sweet and sexy. I'm glad that they are on the same page and came to an understanding about their relationship. And Logan finally gets to hear the words he's been waiting for.
I also liked the nice touches of humor too:
“Ya big idiot! Course I ain’t ever been kissed like that—no one’s been stupid enough to try.”
“Stop it. I want you. What do ya need to believe it, a signed affidavit?”
“The way you are? Ya mean beautiful? ‘Cause I’m failin’ to see how that would lessen your chances with me.”
And I liked this line as well:
“You’re so right for me.”
Yeah, that pretty much sums it up! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad the chapter worked well for you. I really wanted them to have a sweet, simple moment with each other in preparation for all the drama and crap they are about to go through (lol). The inspiration for Marie/Rogue's voice in this fic was a mix of the first movie and the 90's cartoon . . . and when I went back and rewatched a couple of cartoon episodes--hey, it's research--I realized how funny and sarcastic she was at times. Glad you liked! Next update soon =D
Date: 09/20/2011 7:54:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
true about the cartoon. it was an amazing chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review :). I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 09/20/2011 10:47:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
That's all! Omg, you're a terrible terrible writer person. (Completely refuses to acknowledge that I have no room, whatsoever, to talk.) I need what happens next, especially since she's agreed! Damn! Update soon please!!
Also, I have laughed at more of this fic than I thought was possible. It's just amazing.
Author's Response: Ha! I will update as soon as humanly possible, promise. Between work and school, I'm rarely home to type out this story, but rest assured it's fully outlined and has almost filled an entire notebook already. I'm glad you like the touches of humor! Much as I like a touch of angst, I'm not one to write (or read) total downer saddy sad fics too often. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/19/2011 1:35:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved how Logan reacted to the 'Alpha' bit and am delighted he finally got to hear those words he has been so heroically waiting for.
It is also great they are both finally on the same page. One thing less for me to worry about so I can more freely enjoy their handling of 'ferality' and what comes with it. (is that even a word...)
Anyway, thank you for the new chapter. It brightened my very weird weekend.
Author's Response: Glad to brighten your very weird weekend. I'm guessing that means weird in a bad way? *curious* Anyhow, yes, there will still be complications, but I've never been one to leave love interests angsty and brooding for too long. They're both grownups, and they'll soon be facing enough issues from outside sources that they hardly need to be at odds with each other on top of it all! (Okay, okay, they will still be at odds with each other and themselves quite a bit, but that just makes it fun, right?) P.S. Ferality=awesome new word.
Date: 09/19/2011 8:53:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
So I went back and reread because I was trying to get a line on Marie's age. She has been in NY 10yrs, she was with Eric when she was 15, she left the Brotherhood (after returning to them after Liberty island) when they made her absorb Carol (there were years in between when Jean and Charles tried to get Marie to leave) and she was there to help Kitty pick out a prom dress and when she came back from college (so that is at least 6 of the 10yrs there). My guess is that she is close to 30 (15 plus 4 - just a guess of yrs between Liberty island and Carol, plus 10 with the X-men - assuming the Brotherhood isn't in NY). This of course means she has absorbed someone with healing along the way (besides the mission a few weeks ago where she absorbed Sabertooth).
Author's Response: You rock, girl. Your estimation is much better thought out than mine (ha!). 30-ish sounds right. Rogue's delayed aging (or her age itself) wasn't anything I ever planned to explicitly mention, just kind of hint at throughout the story, but I like your deductive reasoning! Might have to include it more explicitly (there's a scene where Logan reads a dossier on her . . . maybe I'll toss in her age/birthday or something :P). And I figure there are a number of reasons, not the least of which being the life force/mutations she's absorbed from other people. Also, Ms. Marvel's 'durability' has always been explained as giving her muscles superhuman strength and endurance. This implies decreased cellular/tissue breakdown, ergo superhuman longevity as well, right? That's why I figure Rogue has hardly aged since she absorbed Carol, and now that she has full control of her powers, the aging process will practically come to a complete halt. Why? Because it's my fuckin' story and no matter what I put them through to get there, Rogue and Wolverine are going to have a LONG happily ever after! =D
Date: 09/18/2011 11:51:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love the little tingle about the fact that Marie might be much older than Logan thinks. I am going back ro reread the entire thing so I can come up with my best guess as to how old she is.
The bed scene was powerful and sexy and sooo right. I love Logan's entire dialog with the Wolverine about expecting what he has not what he can't. I can see that coming to a head between Logan and Wolverine - that's going to be a fabulous thing to read.
You do so well with the voice of the other characters. I am very interested in how the next scene with the Professor plays out and how long it is before Logan just moves in to her room. :)
Author's Response: Ha, you needn't re-read too far. The first hint was planted in chapter 1 :). Rogue has been in Westchester for about a decade, and came to the X-Men shortly after absorbing Carol, so . . . in my mind she's 27 years old. I'm so glad the intimate scene came across well, along with Logan/Wolverine's inner struggle. Those conflicting emotions will definitely come to a head. And quietly moving into Marie's room is one thing, but the real question is, how will Logan convince her to move in with *him* once his private apartment is finished? Dun dun DUN ;P.
Date: 09/18/2011 9:21:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I'm glad that Logan is trying to hold back the commanding of Rogue righ tnow. I can't wait to see how the meeting between Rogue, Logan and the Professor goes. I know Rogue will probably have something to say about what Scott told her. I wonder if she sees Charles as an alpha too, because he is her boss and she takes orders from him. Maybe not an alpha like Logan, but still an older alpha? Hmm? Can't wait to see what you pull from your hat next. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the thoughts about Charles :). Rogue and even Logan to an extent will come to see him as 'alpha', especially later in the fic when he has a reason to display his full power (Ooh, spoiler). I'm glad you liked this chapter and hope you will enjoy the next one too!
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2011 7:51:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh man, they are so perfect for each other. Logan is totally right about that. And I just LOVE that he's the only one who knows her real name. ::melts:: This fic is fantastic. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter, delayed though it was =). They are totally perfect for each other, because this is my damn fic and I wouldn't write them any other way, hee. More soon!
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2011 7:47:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, my. What a payoff. (So to speak.) This is both sexy and tender. It's a fitting first time for the two of them as well as being incredibly hot. *fans self* I also love the welcome home gifts; what a great way to show how beloved Rogue is.
Author's Response: Yayyyeee. I'm so glad you liked. The more intimate scenes are always the hardest to write, simply because I never have a clue whether it's 'hot' or 'hokey'. Funny, I didn't consider this their first time, I guess since I've already written their first-all-the-way-time and first-all-the-way-feral-time scenes. But it really is a big step forward in their relationship. Glad you felt the payoff was worth it!
Date: 09/18/2011 4:53:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ok that was a sexy chapter! I loved it! And OMG I was laughing to my self when Marie was ranting at the beginning. Love that she decided to give them a chance. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed =). Yes, Marie (or should I say Rogue) definitely knows how to get her rant on and cuss like a sailor.