Reviews For Awakenings
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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2010 9:39:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

You hit every 'S' on the head alright. Great job...For future reference, you should put thoughts in bold or italics or something to differentiate them from the rest of the narrative text. Or, failing that, write the whole thing, including the narrative, in first person. --Wendie

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2007 5:45:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nothing wrong with 3S story telling, sometimes they're the best ones!! They let the reader's imagination take up from where you left off - those fics are fun to play with.

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