The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
Barely Legal Since 2000
You hit every 'S' on the head alright. Great job...For future reference, you should put thoughts in bold or italics or something to differentiate them from the rest of the narrative text. Or, failing that, write the whole thing, including the narrative, in first person. --Wendie
Nothing wrong with 3S story telling, sometimes they're the best ones!! They let the reader's imagination take up from where you left off - those fics are fun to play with.