Reviews For The Promised
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Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 9:30:40 AM Title: A Promise Unfulfilled

wonderful writing yet again really in-depth powerful stuff! I'm loving it :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 2:44:05 PM Title: A Promise Unfulfilled

*sniffles*

You made me cry again - beautiful but sooooo sad!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 2:35:01 PM Title: Heroes And Saviours

Oh my...

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Date: 06/12/2007 2:29:12 PM Title: The Promised

Damn good!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2007 3:10:31 PM Title: A Promise Unfulfilled

wow that was intense. I loved every delicious minute of it! I feel so happy that Logan... or should I say James, got to be with Marie. And I feel sad that Marie had to leave him and that she feels like she isn't good enough for him. Please tell me that he will understand why she left and that he will still love her when they find one another again. Can't wait for more! Update soon!

Author's Response: Guess there was no other way for Marie to see it, Logan looks upon her like some sort of angel, yet that requires an innocence she lost a long time ago. She knows what she's done, what she is and the idea that someone can feel that intensively for her despite her misdeeds is overwhelming for her. As for Logan understanding, I'm not so sure, he has a past as cruel as hers, and though the scales may fall from his eyes, it's a wonder just what he will view Marie as once he realises just who and what she is. But they are destined to become the leaders of the oft-mentioned freedom mutant, so I guess they'll have to work towards reconciliation of their pasts and mistakes. LOL thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Aquarius Angel Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 7:07:15 PM Title: The Promised

love your wording and imagiary!! Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks, tried to get it as clear as possible, Marie's doubts, Xavier's words hounding her as she doubts his promise of freedom. And that image of Marie in a pitch black silk kimono with blood red flowers just wouldn't leave me alone. Glad you liked it! LOL :)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 9:24:09 AM Title: The Promised

Ohh wow. that was just sad. Can't wait to read the next installment of this series. Wonder what Logan will do, how he will feel at seeing Marie.

Author's Response: Shock, horror, and oddly I suppose a sense of coming home, a soul restful at last because he'll finally see she's alive, though never that she'd be the one he'd have to fight to the death. Logan's got it tough no doubt!

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