Reviews For Poison
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Reviewer: Angelsineverything Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2013 2:11:01 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Perfect. I love to think of them ending up like this. Hell of a story.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2012 7:31:23 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Very good!!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2012 4:31:51 AM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Great story and wonderful writing.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2009 5:15:46 AM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Amazing. I was wrapped up in this story. It made me squeek out loud in laughter. Especially Kurt and 'Ro being naked as well during the wedding. Oh god, this is brilliant.

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 11:38:29 AM Title: "Storms and Strategies"

I LOVE the wedding. Its perfect for the two of them.

I would love to see what happens when its announced to everyone. I keep imagining the next day, Xavier and Scott are found alive, and that news is overshadowed with the Rogue/Logan wedding news.

Not sure which would be more shocking to the School.

Author's Response: That's an interesting perspective that had never occurred to me. I'm considering this story as a finished piece and I'm working on another that I'm struggling with to NOT get it this lengthy. Been working on it a year now, and that's ridiculous!rnrnThanks for the feedback and the food for thought!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 8:19:44 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

LMAO! that is the sweetest funniest wedding ever.

and i'm amazed Logan didn't bust a boner during the ceremony LOL!

thank you for this amazing story! i have to go now and read others of yours! kudos!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 8:09:19 PM Title: "Ten Dollars"

omg, naked wedding! *squeal*

i wouldn't marry that gorgeous hunk of man any other way!

wait, i'm not Rogue...DAMN!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 8:02:26 PM Title: "Ten Dollars"

"what doesn’t kill me, pisses me off.”

i am so using that in future conversations!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 8:01:41 PM Title: “Stitches”

YAY! he's back.

god i am so glad he is off those machines. my sister was on life support for days and its the most horrible feeling looking at someone you love alive only b/c of a machine.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:55:23 PM Title: “Chopsticks”

that is a COOL explanation for how Rogue can touch Logan now. it hadn't even occured to me that the blood transfusions were anything more than desperate life-saving necessities.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:47:58 PM Title: “A Rogue By Any Other Name”

"Go ahead and gimme a little of that full metal jacket, sugar, I dare ya!"

that is the fiesty tough Rogue i adore!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:40:59 PM Title: “Burn Down the Mission”

oooooh, that is awesome! i knew powers would come back but i didn't expect her in that way.

damn, she is determined to save Logan. good for her!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:31:50 PM Title: “Stygian Depths”

i'm amazed Storm could hold it together in the dark underwater with her claustrophobia. just the idea of diving in the dark then going underground gives me the creeps!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:27:56 PM Title: “Feminine Condescension”

i knew it! damn, i'm good...and so are you! what a cool mission. i don't think i've seen an underwater mission on this site before.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:21:00 PM Title: “A Storm in Westchester County”

ooh ooh, i wanna guess! either all his years of not aging are catching up to him and he's gone age fast OR the adamatium in his body is poisoning him!

must go to next chapter and learn! excellent story...and i'm glad it's long! i loooove the long ones.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:15:11 PM Title: “Lightning and Liquid Silver”

omg, is Logan hallucinating from the fever? freaky!!!

i hate that Storm tipped off Eric with that letter, but she had to give him the middle finger and we needed a reason for him to escape and plot more evil things ha ha!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 7:09:53 PM Title: "Little Miss Rogue"

please tell me this illness means he's getting his mutation back fast b/c, duh, he's a healer.

and woo hoo go Rogue for punching Shelly. i hate that bitch!

but i kinda wish Jubes had been allowed to cut her hair *evil laugh*

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 3:11:29 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

"Clean, smelling nice, appropriately dressed, safe sex and birth control dealt with, good hot man lined up and waiting: it was time to lose the virginity beast."

ok, i wish my own virginity-losing experience could have used something like that LOL! too bad there aren't Logans out there in real life!

Author's Response: Amen, sister! It's been interesting, responding to your reviews as you're reading my story. We're online at the same time. I'm glad you're enjoying Poison - it was fun to write (if sometimes exasperating!). It's been great chatting with you on the reviews. Thanks!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 2:15:42 AM Title: "Bed Head"

ok, that was an insanely hot shower scene! whew! is it hot in here or is it just this story?!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 2:05:43 AM Title: "Stitches & Britches"

oooohm steamy shower scene coming up i hope!

and it'll be interesting to get to know Logan as a physically vulnerable man...great story so far!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 1:39:50 AM Title: "Magnolias and Mayhem"

omg! i was totally not expecting toad to be the one!

i wonder how Logan's "normal" physiology will not handle all the metal in him! will he be able to move under that much weight? will his body attack the metal as a foreign object?

great stuff. on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 1:22:57 AM Title: “Decisions and Deceptions”

Toad...gallant? this is a great spin on him i never thought of.

and Shelly...i love her mutation! is that an original idea or is she someone from the comics?

p.s. i really hope Ruge beds Logan and not Bobby. must dash to next chapter now!

Author's Response: Toad always struck me as the kind of guy who could turn on the charm when it suited him. Shelly is an original character. I wanted someone who was a stereotypical "I HATE HER!" person, so a Texas cheerleading pageant queen was easy pickin's.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 1:10:19 AM Title: "Butch and Sundance"

ok, that last line is hot!!!

i can't wait to run to the next chapter and see what happens.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2009 12:26:50 AM Title: "Storms and Strategies"

So thats it? THE END? Mind u it was an absofuckinglutely fabulous story, but there has GOT to be a sequel and I demand that u start working on it now. lol sigh

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 2:05:02 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Oh, well done! I thought it was a little light on the parts of the story not pertaining to Rogan, but that's also understandable, since that wasn't your primary aim. But the way you dealt with the cure and the mutations was quite plausible and really worked for me. I really liked your original characters (the twins' speech patterns were friggin' hi-larious) and your twist with Toad (though I missed Pyro a bit) and Mystique. I did find Logan a bit out of character, but somehow it worked for me anyway, since you seemed to explain that with the effects of the cure and the effects of the mighty Wolverine ;-)

Thanks again for the pleasant hours.
Melanie

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