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I have NO idea how I missed this one, but I really like it! The only scene I didn't like was the one where Logan gives Jean her due; not because he went too far, but because he didn't go far enough! He could have at least flashed the claws at her, maybe gave her a few minor slashes to drive the point home as it were. I also wish we had the scene where he explains why he did what he did and where they can stuff their objections. Maybe if enough of us ask nicely, she will write a continuation. I can only hope.
I really liked this story.
The crap with Jean doesn't surprise me in the least, just goes to reinforce the 'character' of her, that, she thinks she can get away with anything.
>"Next time you dream, find me, no matter where or who I'm with." She was going to complain that she couldn't do that when he stopped her. "If they care that much about me they'll understand, your part of my family Marie, your important. An if your in pain an' I can help I will."<
This is the only part I have trouble with...1)no matter where he is is a bit tough, considering his wandering, meandering habits...2)we all know about Logan and his 'lady friends'; they care about him about as much as he cares about them - it's a roll in the hay; nothing more nothing less. It will not go over well at all when the throws them over 'cause Marie has had a nightmare. It's great for Marie, but sucky for them.
Would love to have been a fly on the wall for the 'discussion' with the "adults"!! I think I said it in another review...Xavier is the only one that can reign in Mr & Mrs Pole-up-their-butts and their condescending, we know what's best for everyone attitudes!! If you're so inclined, that would make a very interesting next chappie or story *wink* *grin*
Please, please, please do a follow up. I want to see Jean get a roasting.
Really like it!
Hmmm this one screams for more chapters... or a companion piece *makes puppy dog eyes*