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Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 7:58:22 PM Title: Chapter 56

OHHH I am still loving this story! Great update. I am always look forward to more!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 4:38:40 PM Title: Chapter 56

Yes do what Frankenstein says and they'll do as they said - simple.


**“She feels light she’s out of control. **

Maybe 'like'?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2007 5:23:24 PM Title: Chapter 55

*bounces up and down smiling* Awww another baby woohoo!

Reviewer: windeetree Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 7:15:44 PM Title: Chapter 54

amazing, I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 5:21:57 PM Title: Chapter 54

Hmmm I think I could come up with a few things Marie is gonna do, maybe quite nice things.

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Date: 02/19/2007 5:13:36 PM Title: Chapter 53

Very interesting... Marie's mutation is off... she is emotional... hmmm *runs off to read the next chapter*

Reviewer: littlemiss1753 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 5:01:44 PM Title: Chapter 54

I can't believe how much of a bitch jean is being...lolz and I thought I hated her before. And yay for Storm standing up to her :)

Reviewer: littlemiss1753 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 3:38:34 PM Title: Chapter 53

Hmmm whats wrong with Rogue? and im loving all the interaction between Rogue, Jubes and Kitty

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 2:22:48 PM Title: Chapter 52

Evil so evil to stop when it gets interesting!

** ...than you can Jean Grey’s gonna die. ... **

Hmmm maybe 'say' is missing... I saw 'ehlp' and in ch 51 there's 'Exhcnaging' in the last paragraph... I think someone is writing a little too fast... not that I mind ;)



Author's Response: Indeed the old fingers can't keep up at times. Thanks for pointing that out.

Reviewer: aranenumenesse Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 6:36:21 AM Title: Chapter 51

Guh. You have created a true monster, my friend. Took me all morning to read this through. I'm not usually a slow reader, but this one... There were parts that made me go back time and time again. In a way I don't like this story, and in a way this is definitely one of the greatest fics I have ever read.

It's quite hard to tell the difference between good guys and bad guys in this one. Line is so thin and blurred. Maybe only bad guys in this one are those who tortured Rogue and other girls when they got captured, maybe they're all bad. Maybe they're not bad, maybe they're all good. Arg! Thinking makes my head hurt. Or is it the flu? Don't know, don't care...

Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. It kinda made me think to ya know. I mean it's hard when you're in a situation like that to really pick am I good or bad. Deep down I think there are still issues that they have to work out. Still, if my story made you think then that's a good thing. I'm really glad that you managed to get something out of this. Thanks again. It's very much appreciated.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 6:14:29 AM Title: Chapter 51

Hmmm war... no so sure if the war has really begun... the X-Men should take a closer look at the things Jean has been doing, maybe they'd find out a few things.



Author's Response: Hmm perhaps, but Xavier isn't really fond of looking too close to his own manure pile if you get my meaning. Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2007 3:46:01 AM Title: Chapter 50

Someone could thins you got some Jean issues... small ones...

We are friends, right? I sure don't want you pissed off at me... way too dangerous.

Wonder if Beast's gonna change sides.

Author's Response: Just a few rather small issues with jean. Yes, yes of course we're friends...I'm only out to get Jean hehehe Beast? Hmm now there's a question I'll leave unanswered....at least until the next update!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2007 6:09:56 PM Title: Chapter 50

OMG Go Kitty!!! Teach that B*tch a lesson! And hmmm... Beast and warlok are here. Bet warlok dies.... At least i hope so. LOL

Author's Response: He does deserve it doesn't he.

Author's Response: He does deserve it doesn't he.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2007 12:04:03 PM Title: Chapter 49

Ohhhh LOVE this so much!!!! I am glad they are f'ing her up! she deserves it! and Jean is the one who called the army???!!! OMG I actually didn't expect that.

Author's Response: it seemed logical to me. After all she was the one who didn't want Rogue around. Thanks though for the feedback - glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2007 4:43:28 AM Title: Chapter 49

Ow ow ow ouch... not that I mind *evil grin*

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback - its always great to get the readers opinion.

Reviewer: windeetree Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 7:29:29 PM Title: Chapter 49

more please!!!

Reviewer: windeetree Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 2:49:04 AM Title: Chapter 48

lol, make Jean hurt.

Author's Response: She will be...big time.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2007 5:09:07 PM Title: Chapter 48

OHHHHH Now thats awesome! Make her bleed, make her suffer! I love how they all are participating and the men are giving them that chance to avenge themselves. I especially thought it was funny that Jean was trying th throw Logan seductive looks and he just ignored her. LOL Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: hehehe the funs' just getting started for old two faced Jean. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2007 3:36:28 PM Title: Chapter 48

**chain you to the wall and let the rats eat you**

That sounds really good *evil grin*

Reviewer: windeetree Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2007 6:31:26 PM Title: Chapter 47

another great chapter. I love how I can almost feel what they feel in this story. It makes it all the more real to me.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2007 5:56:52 PM Title: Chapter 47

Awww Kitty is already projectile bucket vomiting that's gonna be a super baby ;)

Can't wait to find out more.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2007 3:50:19 PM Title: Chapter 47

Ohhh I'm almost crying here! Poor Rogue. The emotion she is expressing is just so heartwrenching. Love how Logan came at just the right moment! Great Chapter. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 9:03:59 AM Title: Chapter 46

Yet another wonderful chapter! Kitty is pregnant! Yay! I like that a lot. I love how you turned Scott from the enemy into one of the main guys. I also love that you are exploring Jeans motives for her behavior. Can't wait till Logan, Tank and Scott get her right where they want her. I also hope Frankenstein gets a piece of her too since they are the ones Jean wronged the most. Looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon please!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 6:10:22 AM Title: Chapter 46

**“Why be jealous of a bunch of teenagers? Why go as far as she did to get rid of them?”**

I can't wait to find out too.


Author's Response: I'm hoping to have updates up soon! Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: windeetree Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2007 8:37:00 PM Title: Chapter 46

This is an amazing story, I really enjoy how how much the girls care for one another. Please add are soon.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you're enjoying the story.

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