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Reviewer: Destinyorton Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2012 2:51:29 AM Title: The Patient

Where is logan rouge cant love alex no way

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2011 11:18:36 PM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

Well, I hope the "verdict" is in on your ending, or I have a feeling we'll be weaiting a long time on the outcome of this tale! I was not happy that their reunion was interrupted before we coudl get anybody's true reaction! I felt cheated of my payoff.

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2010 7:41:51 PM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

This is a great story! Please update soon!

Reviewer: RebelQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2010 10:24:42 AM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

EEEK!! I have been patiently waiting for this chapter and you leave me hanging with that cliffhanger?! Please, please,PLEASE update soon.

I can't wait to see more Rogan interaction but also Frost/Cyclops.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 1:57:43 AM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

No. NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm so sad. I want to cry. When you said they would see each other face to face, I thought they were going to actually talk to each other! Not to where Logan thinks he is seeing things. I am very unsatisfied with this chapter and I demand more! well... when you get around to it *wink*

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 1:38:09 AM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT!!! CANT WAIT! *Must click Next!* haha

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2010 10:20:42 PM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

y'know i like Jessie and Alex so much i'm actually kinda not wanting Logan to show up at this event and throw everything outta whack.

Author's Response: I know, I'm having a really hard time with the ending. I really enjoy writing Alex and Jessie together. But there there's the whole Logan and Rogue destined to be together. Currently the verdict is still out on the ending, we'll see what happens!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2010 10:16:40 PM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

that's so cool that marie and alex met as children.

*shudder* growing with Sinister experimenting on them. surprised they aren't MORE screwed up!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2010 10:06:54 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

woo hoo, lots of great action and fighting, love it! and i bet that's Victor following her.

Author's Response: ;) He has a small part, but an important one!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2010 10:00:18 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

ahhhhh Dr. Nathaniel Esses...better know as Mr. Sinister *cue scary music*

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2010 10:00:05 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

ahhhhh Dr. Nathaniel Esses...better know as Mr. Sinister *cue scary music*

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2010 7:43:24 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

I'm now kind of obsessed with the song you included. Fits perfectly with this chapter

Author's Response: thank you I thought so too, I love that song!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 11:01:36 AM Title: Every Puzzle has its pieces

Got into this story late. Interested to see where it goes. Very complex story, but you're handling it very well. So angsty! Please for some type of happy ending! Pretty please with a feral mutant on top. *bats eyes. pouts*

Author's Response: I'll try my best, but not before a lot of angst!! enjoy!

Reviewer: seargentlambchop Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2010 10:17:32 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

Where is Rogue?!

And, Remmy is getting off way to lightly.

Author's Response: As for Remmy I'm not sure I think his part in this story ends, might change my mind! And for Rogue We find out in the next segment which I just posted the first chapter to. I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2010 11:58:49 AM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

That is a terrible place to be... knowing that you couldn't save the woman you loved... I hope the epilogue is happier!

Author's Response: I don't know that's it happier, I'll let you be the judge of that but I hope you enjoy it anyways ! next segment will be up soon!

Reviewer: seargentlambchop Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2010 10:51:18 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

NEED FASTER UPDATES!!!

Your killing me Smalls!

But loving the drama.

Author's Response: thanks glad your enjoying and for your reading pleasure I've added the next chapter and i think it's longer than the rest. one more chapter to go and it's done, enjoy!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 3:59:18 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

When this all started, I never expected Remy to play such a large role, but I like what you're doing with the characters and their relationships. I'm looking forward to when the end of 'The Patient' meets up with the events of this story, when not one, not two, but three men are all competing for Marie's heart.

This image was exceptional: "but the salt in the air was like an albatross on his chest." Very cool. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm so glad to hear that your enjoying this. There's still a lot more surprises in store. Sorry to dissapoint a little but, this series will end at the ending of the second chapter in the Patient. The next series will tie in both stories. Hope you enjoy I still have quite a lot of twist comming into play!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 3:02:51 AM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

Wow. This story has captured my heart. It really has. Now, I feel for Remy. Its hard knowing that the woman you love isnt yours, but also knowing that you partook in her abduction unknowingly... that's brutal. I'm excited for the next chapter :D

Author's Response: thank you for your review, next chapter up hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2010 2:46:43 AM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

You definitely need a good beta, who can focus on mis-spelled words and punctuation. You have many, many run-on sentences, which make it confusing to read. Your content is damned good! I'm hooked into the story, even if the missing punctuation and typos are distracting.
If a beta doesn't appear, e-mail me - I'll give it a go with you.
wolf755@hotmail.com
Keep up the good work! I really like the way this story is developing.

Author's Response: thank you for your review and I'm glad your enjoying let me know if you can beta the last chapter for me it's almost done.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2010 7:29:59 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

OOOOH. I really like this one. It gave us a glimpse at how things were. Poor Gambit... And now My heartstrings are pulling a little more for the present Logan.

I AM ALWAYS APPROVING OF SMUT. :D

Author's Response: thanks for the review. Logan's carrying a lot of guilt on his shoulder, we find out why in the next chapter hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 6:13:49 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

Oooh, love that last line. So, Remy feels more than he lets on and now Logan knows it. That's got tons of potential. Can't wait to see how this figures in all we know has happened so far.

As for the smut--only if it truly serves the story at this point. I love good Rogan smut as much as the next person, but don't put it in until it's really necessary. --Wendie

Author's Response: caught that did you, why do you think he wanted to take off his head. ;)rnrnThanks for the thoughts I for now I've nixed the smut maybe later! Hope you enjoy the next chapter.

Reviewer: justanji Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 9:58:33 PM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

Im really liking the feel of this one! :D Cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: thanks for the review next chapter up, hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 7:08:14 AM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

I've never seen Scott and Logan portrayed this way before and I have to say I like it. They're both right, each in their own way, but Logan is also wrong to lose control so much that he would threaten a teammate. Very nicely done. I look forward to more. --Wendie

Author's Response: I wanted for Scott to come across as conflicted cause this is his family, but he also has a responsibilty to the team. and Logan's has only one idea in his head to get Marie back at any cost. Hope you enjoy what's to come.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 1:50:54 AM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

I really like where this story is going. It has massive amounts of potential. But I must say, the chapters are way too short. This is the first time I think I have read short chapters and actually had the urge to continue the story in my own twisted mind before you get the other chapters up. *shrugs* I'm a freak. But I hope you update soon! With longer chapters!

Author's Response: I'm so glad your enjoying it. Sorry about the short chapter but I think I can make them a bit longer we'll see hope you enjoy this next one.

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 12:14:57 AM Title: The hottest love has the coldest end

Love the depiction of logan. I can picture his rage and the fact that you made him so stubborn actually reminds me of the comic version more than the movie. Post quickly!

Author's Response: I know that's what I was going for. and I have a few surprises if you follow the comics at all. enjoy!rnrn

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