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Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2013 8:30:14 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Fantastic! Sorry not to see more of this. Was such a great read, really wanted to know where it would go next. Now all I have are bad guesses :(

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2012 6:13:03 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Just discovered this, thought it was brilliant, intense and very hot, so sorry there wasn't more of it!

Reviewer: nyclover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2009 10:36:35 AM Title: Chapter One

I'd love to see the end of this fic...it's so great, please continue!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 1:56:47 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

oh plz plz plz plz plz a thousand times plz update this right away, i dont come across stories like this that are realyy good and i have to find out. does logan get jealous of max? does rogue get pregnant(pill doesnt always work) do her and logan get caught? ohh plz update asap plz!

Reviewer: Logansmate Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2009 12:50:19 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

When will you update? It's been soooo long and I'm dying.

Reviewer: Logansmate Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 1:38:40 AM Title: Chapter One

I really like this story. Why did you stop?

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 12:25:20 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2008 10:28:41 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

More please. Don't forget us readers. xXx

Reviewer: RandomP Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2008 9:26:25 AM Title: Chapter Four

I bet Logan wants to take Marie on his desk.

Reviewer: Logansmate Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2008 12:58:59 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

God this story is getting good. I just love these kinds of situations when the guy is a little older than the girl, it's some how more interesting. When are you going to update? PLEASE make it SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2008 12:33:51 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Max being a mutant was definitely something I didn't expect. At least I can understand why he treated Marie so horribly. It was expected of him. For him, it has to suck that he had to hide that he was a mutant. If someone does find out about him being Charles's grandnephew, he'll be screwed big time. If Magneto found out, he'd probably use him to get to the X-Men. Anyway, the scene between Logan and Marie was a nice touch. They're going to have to rely on their love for one another to get through the war that is rapidly approaching. Update soon.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2008 12:22:05 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Even though it was short, loved the scene between Logan and Marie. Wonder what he'd think if he saw Marie coming out of the Janitor's closet with Max? Nice twist with Max being related to Charles; didn't see that one coming. Great work. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 1:50:58 AM Title: Chapter One

Nice twist! Anyways, I'm glad to hear that you are doing much better. Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2008 11:27:00 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Wow! Totally unexpected, eh? I hope that driver's been charged...damned crazy people. Lord, I hope you're doing a bit better; glad you're alright. Geez... No rush on those updates, ok? Just relax and concentrate on getting better! :)

Author's Response: i'd actually planned on having stallworth being a mutant from the very beginning, so i guess to you all it IS unexpected haha. i wanted to have someone who was just so prejudiced against mutants that they had to have a past of their own with the mutation, and stallworth fit the bill! thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2008 11:14:31 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Great to see you back! Nice new twist to the story. Do I sense a little Logan jealousy in the future?

Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 12:02:50 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Wow. That was hot. And I like the tenderness of their relationship but it's gonna be ugly when the others find about about them while she's still his student.

-Ellie

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 11:54:28 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Get better soon!

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 12:28:15 AM Title: Chapter One

Omgosh! I was wondering what happened to ya! Well, I hope for the best in your recovery. Happy healing hun. You'll be in my thoughts :)

And I can't wait for the rest of your wonderful story! But healing is always first!

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 3:54:00 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Where have you disappeared to? This was such as good story!! Please come back with more!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 11:47:07 PM Title: Chapter Nine

More chapters are coming soon, right? *looks pathetic* pweese!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 8:10:42 PM Title: Chapter Nine

This chapter was absolutely beautiful. The love between Logan and Marie was so evident during their passionate scene together. I loved all the vivid descriptions and could see them playing out in my mind. I especially love this line, 'A sobbing moan was ripped through her throat as pleasure shot through her system, overwhelming her mind and senses as Logan made love to her.' That really shows the beauty of this scene as they have fallen in love. Of course, there are those that are willing to make trouble if they find out about Logan and Marie's romantic yet forbidden relationship. I hope that doesn't happen. Update soon.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 1:16:34 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Due to computer problems i was unable to review this story for a while. I got it fixed and hereI am, telling you I LOVE this story! Its so good. I love the dynamic between Logan and Marie. The passion they feel for one another just jumps off the page (well computer screen anyway. LOL) The last chapters have been Really Hot. Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2008 11:17:20 AM Title: Chapter Nine

oh wow, I was crying at first very sad begining.

But oh my what an ending, great stuff.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2008 12:12:17 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Sooo good! I'm glad you posted again so soon. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 9:24:15 PM Title: Chapter Eight

You still my girl?... loved that line. I've been meaning to mention that your Logan reminds me a little bit of the version of Logan from X-Men: Evolution. Love this story; can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thirtieth review!! woooo!rnrnhaha sorry this is exciting to me :)

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