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Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 11:34:09 AM Title: Chapter 19 Laid out in Lavender

Oh wow even I need the alternate ending and all I ever seem to write is angst. So me three. But if it had to be a sad ending you wrote it beautifully I came to work with tear tracks it was heart breaking.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review, it was very difficult to write. Still no sure on the alternate ending might be even more angsty!!!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 3:00:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 Laid out in Lavender

Im so....crushed.

alternate ending. Please.

Author's Response: I'm currently typing one, but you don't expect a happy ending ;(

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 2:27:28 AM Title: Chapter 19 Laid out in Lavender

o plz give an alternate ending when rogue doesnt die. i hate it when those 2 are ropped appart through death

Reviewer: glovegrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2010 9:21:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can you do the alternate ending too?

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2010 2:02:51 AM Title: What goes around comes back around!!!

update? when soon? plz?

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2010 9:01:30 PM Title: What goes around comes back around!!!

at least Jean is dead, that's something that makes me wanna do a happy dance. too bad she had to take out Scott and the baby with her selfishness too.

seriously, she's such a good bad guy it's fun to hate her.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:52:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 And From the Ashes the Phoenix shall rise

ding dong the witch is dead...i hope. i don't know b/c this story isn't finished.

oh i hope it will be one day!

Author's Response: thank you so much I has almost given up on this story, I'm really glad you enjoyed it, sometimes I think it's a little dark, and it takes a lot to get into this mind set. almost finsihed one more chapter to go hope you enjoy it and it lives up to expectations!!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:42:01 AM Title: Chapter 14 And We All Fall Down

grrrrr, i despise the Phoenix. hope she gets what's coming to her in the end...preferably on the end of Wolverine or Sabertooth's claws.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:38:49 AM Title: Chapter 13 We Must Fight To Run Away

great job with Pyro, especially how his emotion fuel his mutation. those guards needed to burn.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:35:18 AM Title: Chapter 12 Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more

oh jeez, the trench is horrible. brought to mind the Holocaust and mass graves.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:30:09 AM Title: 11-The Face That Launched A Thousand Ships

aaaggggh! Jean must die die die!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:21:19 AM Title: Chapter 8 Beyond the Pleasure for the ID

good, take the bitch down!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:11:54 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who are My Friends

hate Jean! like Scott, for once.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:08:57 AM Title: Chapter 4 Fire and Steel

totally didn't not expect a lab scenario, which is awesome. keep me guessing!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:04:44 AM Title: Vegas Stars and strips

nah, i like Victor in this chapter. the way you explained how his feral nature would protect a female bearing young makes perfect sense.

and i've got a bit of a thing for Sabertooth/Rogue pairings so this is awesome!

of course Logan's got to show up and stir up shit, so i'm rushing to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm a huge Rogan fan but I really enjoy to see Sabertooth/Rogue together, I think they make an awesome match. Thanks I was hoping that with his feral nature it would make sense!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 4:51:28 AM Title: The Road Trip.... cut Short

just found this story and so glad i did! wow, she's pregnant...and Logan is such an asshole.

i hope he gets some sense knocked into him...and jean gets what's coming to her. I am a total Jean hater!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2008 2:17:31 PM Title: Chapter 17 And From the Ashes the Phoenix shall rise

More plz.
xXx

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 9:32:12 PM Title: Chapter 16 Fairytales don't always Have a Happy ending, Do They? Part 2

holy crap that was bloody! But i still think that rat bastard deserved to suffer more than that. Glad he is dead though. and Please! Please can you change your mind and have this have a nice ending? Please? After all that Rogue deserves to be happy, not dead.... So Please.....?

Author's Response: I don't know, I'm not that great at writing happy endings. But maybe with enough feeback I'd write an ulternate ending. Well see ;) I'll try my best.

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2008 5:57:29 AM Title: Chapter 14 And We All Fall Down

You're deliberately prolonging the whole rescue mission aren't you?! ;-)
Poor Xavier...all alone in the mansion with a lunatic Jean...brrrr!!!

Author's Response: yeah just a little bit ;) lol

Reviewer: snwbll1990r Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 11:09:53 PM Title: Chapter 14 And We All Fall Down

I can not wait to see what is in the files that Cyclopes took. Will Logan find Rogue with Victor.

Author's Response: Glad your still enjoying the fic. I can't spoil the story now can I. Hope you enjoy the chapters to come.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 11:31:16 AM Title: Chapter 13 We Must Fight To Run Away

Poor Rogue! Please let the x-men get in there and help her before she looses the baby! I love that Pyro went nuts. The unselfish love he has for Rogue is a beautiful thing. Update soon! Plese!

Author's Response: yeah I like that idea too I thought that Rogue deserved something like that. Hope you enjoy this next chapter.

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 2:57:05 AM Title: Chapter 13 We Must Fight To Run Away

Awww!! I quite like Pyro's character...does he live?Or die???
Good job by the way! And of course: update! ;-)

Author's Response: thanks for the review hope you enjoy the next chapter, and we won't know about Pyro's fate until a little later.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 1:11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12 Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more

wow. My heart breaks for Logan. To have been raped in both mind and body is just awful but to loose the love of his life because of it thats on a whole different level of tragic. I hope Mrie is ok, that Logan gets to her before she gives up. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, hope you enjoy the next chapter. Just a fair warning this is not a happy ending story, hope you enjoy it anyway.

Reviewer: Shuga Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 10:13:44 AM Title: Chapter 12 Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more

I am loving this story and the way that you have used Sabertooth has peeked my attention. I hope to see more of him and much more to this story soon.
I also hope that this story doesnt end too badly, it has such potential!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying the story. Can't promise a happy ending, actually it will be very angsty. And we will definitly have more Sabertooth.

Reviewer: snwbll1990r Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2008 6:36:40 PM Title: 11-The Face That Launched A Thousand Ships

the Professor is so dumb when it comes to Jean. He needs to get rid of her for good.

Cann't wait for the next chapter. The supence is is killing me!

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for the review, glad your still enjoying the story.

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