That was beautiful and smoking hot! Loved it!

A nice fluffy love piece you have here. One suggestion to improve your writing style would be to focus more on giving your characters a voice. You write from a writers perspective, as in, YOU are telling us a story, not letting a story unravel through the characters voices. Giving your characters a little more depth and emotion (not just telling us what they are feeling) would appeal to more readers. You are really good at descriptions and overall your style is really clean making it an easy read. Good luck in the future!