The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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VERY nice! Loved the single word statements..."Mind. Gutter. Out. Now." Aw...c'mon, this IS Logan we're talking about here! Great little one shot!
If I'd been reading your first paragraph out loud, I'd have died from lack of oxygen before I got to the end. As run-on sentences go, it may hold some sort of record for the longest one. HOWEVER, you recovered so beautifully after that that you are entirely forgiven. This was so sweet and lovely. You kept all the best parts of Logan intact while still making him 'respectable'--that honor and loyalty thing is so true! Nice job. --Wendie