Well, I guess it's just a little too sugary sweet for me. It's not bad, but there are some things that just seemed improbable, like Scott's reaction to the relationship. There were also some elements that I thought could have been explored more thoroughly, like Logan's reaction to waking up without a memory and with the claws in a slightly more peaceful setting, and some of the interaction just felt stilted. Plus, there's still no way to know at two weeks that someone is pregnant. Symptoms like nausea don't even start to develop until four or so weeks. I just didn't find it very believable.