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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2016 4:44:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

WONDERFUL!!  All encompassing, enveloping...insidious even!  I was so totally ensconced by this story I almost didn't want it to end. The idea of the balance, "the corruption that eats the fruit to fertilise the soil"....the age old fight between good and evil, brought almost down to the celluar level...in each of us. Amazingly done, Joanne, going into my favorites for sure!



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this one, it took a while to prefect, I wanted it to be just on the side of dark but filled with the haunting depth that it could and would return one day and only Logan and maybe Marie would remember it.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2016 4:26:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

Please, oh PLEASE, you're not going to let the beast win, are you, Jo?

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Date: 11/22/2016 4:03:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Whoooaaa......creepy doesn't even BEGIN to describe.....

I'm so entirely entrenched in your story, Joanne...you're an amazing story teller...can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2016 3:49:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Was that Storm's talisman giving Jubilee a hand? Good thing she kept the feather, it grounds her to the event, proves to her that it was real. Hopefully it will help her talk about it soon.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2016 2:21:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

Me thinks there IS something wicked going on there at Dark's Pandemonium Carnival!

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Date: 11/22/2016 2:04:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

OOOooooooo!!!  This is sounding goooooood!!!  Does something wicked this way come??

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 3:58:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

Very very creepy, but I loved every minute. Great work!

Reviewer: Silvereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2009 8:02:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story. Very dark!

Reviewer: Morgy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2007 4:27:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow...
amazing story, you are really really talented and creative
I really liked it, although I seriously think you should give some warnings about it

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