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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2008 5:20:03 AM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

Like the talk they had.

Logan knew now that all he wanted was Marie.

Finally! Sometimes he is a little slow.

more please

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2008 4:43:45 AM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

I've enjoyed this whole story, but this specific chapter is brilliant, gripping, poignant. The interplay between Logan and Joe is.. just... wow.
I give it a rare 10 rating.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2008 9:43:59 AM Title: If This Is Goodbye

oh that was just a heartbreaking chapter, I even shead a tear. Please update soon, this is just a great fic.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2008 7:27:59 AM Title: If This Is Goodbye

Typical of Logan leaving. I hope you bring him back soon, he needs to be there for Rogue.

Another excellent chapter :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2008 4:23:12 AM Title: If This Is Goodbye

*glares at Logan*

Reviewer: Cassandra Lee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 11:27:09 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Sorry I haven't reveiwed but I've been keeping up with this story and I'm lovin it so far. I was really pissed about the whole Scott killing thing in X3 also. I hope you keep posting soon.

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 10:01:24 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Hi! I've come late to this and just read all 11 chapters in one go .. fabulous work. You plot so well that the words just leap off the page, and the grammar, typos etc that seem to be worrying you aren't even noticeable. (And I'm a professional editor.) I hope you have a few more chapters for us, but well done on keeping this so tight and suspenseful so far. Look forward to reading the rest!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 12:44:02 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

You're doing an excellent job with this story. It feels so familiar since I've seen X3 many times, and yet you've juggled the details around so smoothly to make it a fresh take. Love it!

Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 5:34:02 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

This chapter was perfect. Definately lived up to my expectations. Bravo.

I'm a huge Cyke fan. Always have been. Just never liked Jean. So I'm glad that you brought him back. The way you went about it was very original. Again, bravo. :D

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Rogue will be awake in it, right? Should be interesting to see how everyone reacts to her - especially Bobby and Logan. *evil grin* I can't wait!!

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 3:59:40 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

I'm rubbish at reading and reviewing these days - lazy *g* But I'm enjoying this - it's dragged me out my lurkdom! I like how you're developing X3's excuse for a plot into something so much better. I'm glad about Scott, I hated what happened to him in X3 and I love your idea for reversing that. And I totally love John's snarky little comments. He rocks! - the spiffy uniform bit in the last chapter made me laugh out loud *g*

Looking forward to finding out what happens next.

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 10:37:01 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

I'm a fan of scott too, especially when he is with somebody other than Marie and when him and Logan are buddies:)

good job on this chapter! can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 8:40:02 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Thank you! Thank you for loading up this chapter and not letting us suffer long to get a another update. Another great chapter. You have a talent for writing a compelling story with no wasted action. Every word has its purpose, with no pointless filler.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 8:29:48 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Wow, that actually moved me. Why did you wait so long before writing? You are a wonderful author, and I hope that this story is just the first of many we will see from you.
More please!

Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2008 2:42:04 PM Title: Sleeping Beauty

Mean. So mean. You've got to stop with the abrupt cliffhangers. You're killing me here.

Seriously though, you are on a roll. This was another excellent chapter. Bravo. Wow......I mean just.....wow.

I don't suppose I could talk you into loading the next chapter though. Because the suspense is already driving me nuts.

It is Rogue in control, right?! Have they gone to AL to pick up Scott or something? Argh.

I formally and humbly request the next chapter. Pretty please. Like now would be awesome. Cause I am SO curious. I can't wait to read more and as the author it falls to you to feed the addiction. :D

Author's Response: Glad you like it so much. just posted a new one, so i hope it goes over well. let me know what you think!

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2008 9:55:33 AM Title: Sleeping Beauty

You and your cliffhangers! I'm glad you're getting a kick out of writing this story because we sure as hell enjoy reading it. Post more soon! I'll just be sitting here, feverishly hitting the refresh button.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2008 7:30:40 AM Title: Sleeping Beauty

Nice cliffhanger!!! Where are you taking us?!?! Love it!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2008 5:51:55 AM Title: Sleeping Beauty

Ooooh another evil cliffhanger!

more please... of the story not the cliffhangers ;)

Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 8:15:19 PM Title: Falling Slowly

Oh. My. God.

This was your best chapter yet. You actually had me tearing up there at the end. It was just so moving. I loved that it took this to make Logan see, really see how much he needs Marie.

You handled this beautifully. *applauds* Bravo.

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Don't keep me in suspense. More please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I really poured my heart into that one, so I'm glad it affected you; it's the ultimate compliment. Now I gotta finish the next chapter :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 3:49:06 AM Title: Falling Slowly

more please

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 2:03:31 AM Title: Falling Slowly

Ha, I did stick around. You posted Chapter 9 twice, though. I read it again anyway.

Author's Response: yeah, i just fixed that little error. whoops. i hope it was worth waiting around for :)

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 1:50:07 AM Title: Choices

I literally check for an update about 10 times a day. Thank you for another great chapter.

Author's Response: Well, i hope you're still sticking around cause i just posed a new one like, 5 minutes after you wrote this. lol. i hope you like this one too!

Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2008 4:21:13 PM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes

I think that you're being way too hard on yourself. This was a great chapter. One thing though, please don't let Jean live. You've GOT to kill her off. Please. Pretty please. That was the one thing about the third X-Men movie that I actually liked - that Jean Grey died.

And yes, I realize that I have "Jean issues." But hey, doesn't everyone who follows the Rogue/Logan ship have them to an extent! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the nice review. oh and though I don't want to spoil anything I'll just say this: I like Jean's character... but not that much. ;)

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2008 8:06:49 AM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes

My only question is: When will I be able to read more!?!?!?

I'm a greedy girl, aren't I?
(ok - that was two questions.)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2008 4:18:54 AM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes

Evil cliffhanger!

Reviewer: Morbidmuch Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2008 1:54:03 PM Title: He Does

very instereting...just one things though; when Rogue absorbes Logan, she shouldn't get his metal claws, since they're not a part of his mutation. Or maybe I'm wrong, I dunno

Author's Response: Actually, she doesn't get his metal claws, she gets his bone claws, which are part of Wolverine's mutation, the government just grafted metal onto them. Also, in the comics when Rogue absorbs him, she does aquire bone claws for a while.

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