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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2016 2:03:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very cute, captures that instant panic of "OH SH--, what'd I do?!?"  GREAT first try.

Reviewer: CaffineYankee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 3:07:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good. My one suggestion would be to separate when the different characters are speaking. It would make the story easier to read.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wondered about that after I posted it. It seemed a bit jumbled. I'll do that next time.

Reviewer: Cookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2008 6:43:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very cute story, I enjoyed it...maybe a sequel?

Author's Response: I'm throwing ideas around for one. Maybe w/the response of the other characters and how L/M deal w/that. Glad you liked it!! Thanks!

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