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I *thoroughly* enjoyed this entire story! Other than some typos and grammatical errors that made reading in a few spots difficult, it was entertaining as all get out, had me on the edge of my seat the whole way and was an entirely original telling of Marie's mutation background! Bravo Epic, bravo!
*skipping along with a ball bat in hand, singing* Someone's gonna get it!!
Not understanding the line...
"Emma got the feeling that this could have gone better if she had killed someone."
but need to press on...got to finish this I'm sooooo involved!!
buwahahahahahaha logan fainted x3
"Why didn't you wear a condom?!" lolz
and the names....buwahahahahaha pricless
Good ending though
Yay Pheonix didn't take over all the way :3
LE GASP!!!! D:
gah who is it???
Lols storms rose bush...lols x3
Wow...i kinda like scott in this one ;3
rawr...i wanted kitty to pay... D:
A little sad that the adimantium was lost though its probablly a relief not to have that constant reminder of his unknown past.
Buwahahahahahahahaha i love how bobby got socked in the face!
D: No marie NO!!!!
D: No marie NO!!!!
other than the typos really good
WHAT A TWIST!
Interesting so far...look forward to reading the rest
I really think you should write your own stories, You are a GREAT writer. I don't know, I just love the way you describe some things with out getting me bored.
LMAO! i can't believe fainted either! what a wussy!
but i do like the name Tank!
Author's Response: thanks for all the feedback! I had forgotten how long this story was, so it was great to hear about it again! I wanted to end it on something really happy that would close the whole story with a smile. Plus, I just couldn't get my brother's voice out of my head when he said he wanted to name his son 'Hank the Tank'. Thanks again!!!
good for her! i was hoping she would be able to use her psychi abilities to push something into his head he couldn't handle. way to go!
Author's Response: it was the worst thing I could think of to do to him. Something that would just take away every ounce of sanity he had and leave him a blubbering fool on the outside and trapped in a forever nightmare in his mind.
ugh, what sick disgusting character! brilliant!
god, i hope she either kills him or does some psychic scramble of his brains!
Author's Response: I wanted to make him someone that would make even Magneto look proper and esteemed
is she going to find her mother...or confront her father? on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: She has a lot in her past that she deserves her revenge for.
wow...go Rogue Phoenix! ican't BELIEVE she killed Magneto, but i am sooo glad she did! and she made him fear her before she did! woo hoo!
now what the hell is going to happen to her mind now? off to next chapter!
Author's Response: I wanted to give Magneto a proper death
i'm surprised cody was so cool, but it has been years.
ooooh, mystique! i hope there's a fight!
Author's Response: Cody was a last minute idea, that actually helped me to give mystique a way in with out being noticed.