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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2015 1:39:32 PM Title: Chapter 40

I *thoroughly* enjoyed this entire story! Other than some typos and grammatical errors that made reading in a few spots difficult, it was entertaining as all get out, had me on the edge of my seat the whole way and was an entirely original telling of Marie's mutation background! Bravo Epic, bravo!

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Date: 12/04/2015 4:49:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

*skipping along with a ball bat in hand, singing* Someone's gonna get it!!

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Date: 12/04/2015 4:40:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

Not understanding the line...
"Emma got the feeling that this could have gone better if she had killed someone."
but need to press on...got to finish this I'm sooooo involved!!

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2011 9:05:09 PM Title: Chapter 40

buwahahahahahaha logan fainted x3

"Why didn't you wear a condom?!" lolz

and the names....buwahahahahaha pricless


Good ending though

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2011 8:29:22 PM Title: Chapter 35

Yay Pheonix didn't take over all the way :3

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Date: 06/07/2011 8:18:24 PM Title: Chapter 34

LE GASP!!!! D:

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Date: 06/05/2011 3:42:05 PM Title: Chapter 24

gah who is it???

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Date: 06/05/2011 2:46:55 AM Title: Chapter 21

Lols storms rose bush...lols x3

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Date: 06/05/2011 2:34:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow...i kinda like scott in this one ;3

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Date: 06/05/2011 2:14:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

rawr...i wanted kitty to pay... D:

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Date: 06/05/2011 2:00:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

A little sad that the adimantium was lost though its probablly a relief not to have that constant reminder of his unknown past.

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 1:49:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

Buwahahahahahahahaha i love how bobby got socked in the face!

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Date: 06/05/2011 1:34:46 AM Title: Chapter 8

D:

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Date: 06/05/2011 1:14:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

D: No marie NO!!!!

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Date: 06/05/2011 1:12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

D: No marie NO!!!!

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Date: 06/05/2011 12:58:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

other than the typos really good

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Date: 06/05/2011 12:53:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

WHAT A TWIST!

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Date: 06/05/2011 12:47:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting so far...look forward to reading the rest

Reviewer: jobeatty Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2010 1:23:01 AM Title: Chapter 7

I really think you should write your own stories, You are a GREAT writer. I don't know, I just love the way you describe some things with out getting me bored.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 12:37:22 AM Title: Chapter 40

LMAO! i can't believe fainted either! what a wussy!

but i do like the name Tank!

Author's Response: thanks for all the feedback! I had forgotten how long this story was, so it was great to hear about it again! I wanted to end it on something really happy that would close the whole story with a smile. Plus, I just couldn't get my brother's voice out of my head when he said he wanted to name his son 'Hank the Tank'. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 12:26:55 AM Title: Chapter 38

good for her! i was hoping she would be able to use her psychi abilities to push something into his head he couldn't handle. way to go!

Author's Response: it was the worst thing I could think of to do to him. Something that would just take away every ounce of sanity he had and leave him a blubbering fool on the outside and trapped in a forever nightmare in his mind.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 12:20:07 AM Title: Chapter 37

ugh, what sick disgusting character! brilliant!

god, i hope she either kills him or does some psychic scramble of his brains!

Author's Response: I wanted to make him someone that would make even Magneto look proper and esteemed

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 12:13:59 AM Title: Chapter 36

is she going to find her mother...or confront her father? on the edge of my seat!

Author's Response: She has a lot in her past that she deserves her revenge for.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 12:10:35 AM Title: Chapter 35

wow...go Rogue Phoenix! ican't BELIEVE she killed Magneto, but i am sooo glad she did! and she made him fear her before she did! woo hoo!

now what the hell is going to happen to her mind now? off to next chapter!

Author's Response: I wanted to give Magneto a proper death

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 12:03:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

i'm surprised cody was so cool, but it has been years.

ooooh, mystique! i hope there's a fight!

Author's Response: Cody was a last minute idea, that actually helped me to give mystique a way in with out being noticed.

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