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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:53:43 PM Title: Chapter 31

i am so glad Leah drove Owen insane! it's the least that monster deserved!

and it's awesome to think Marie was raised by such strong people.

Author's Response: I wanted to give her a good past relationship with her family, even if she did take off. A reason to go home.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:51:19 PM Title: Chapter 30

just had to say as a Southerner you captured the voice and cadence of the Southern speech PERFECTLY.

Author's Response: Thanks. I was a little worried about that, honestly. I'm from the west, and the only real life example that I had was my mother's friend from Georgia, so I pretty much just wrote it down how I heard it in my mind.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:42:17 PM Title: Chapter 27

i really like the honesty of this scene with bobby. it was definitely needed to have adult coversation about them...esp. after she punched him in the face with his own power LOL!

Author's Response: Origanally, it was supposed to be a more lovey dovey scene between Rogue and Logan, but I felt that there were still things that needed to be said. She punched him, sure, but then there was the question of why she cared for him in the first place.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:33:48 PM Title: Chapter 25

rogue dismissed worries about controlling Ms. Marvel so easily...is this setting up for some Phoenix related freak out? can't wait to see!

Author's Response: I really wanted to get this story moving, especially after dealing with all the other already accumulated abilities.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:28:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

oooooh, is it ms. marvel??? must dash to next chapter and find out!

Author's Response: I like it when Rogue can fly and has super strength

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:18:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

LOL! piotr with the perfect timing!

i swear i actually had a kiss at prom interrupted by a drunk friend in a similar fashion!

Author's Response: Yeah... Me too. I just felt that the interruption in itself would be great comedy relief

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:16:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

ok, i thought logan at prom would be cheesey...but SWOON! that was so sweet and sexy at once!

Author's Response: Logan in a tux... I had to throw it in somewhere. But, really, it's one of those 'what if it was me?'

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:11:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

whew! i was a little worries scott was boing to have some mixed up Jean-is-part-of-Rogue crush or something. but this makes a lot more sense. he's a grown man and pretty rational and would know he'd need to leave to get his head on straight. i really like how you handled this and let them part on a good note.

Author's Response: Like I said, I have always liked Scott. I wanted there to be some kind of curiosity, But, by this chapter, I also wanted it resolved, on a good note.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 11:04:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

yes! i was wondering when the inner Wolverine in her head was going to start causing problems. i love that duality in rogue, the one part of a person she stole that she can never block out.

Author's Response: It made sense to me. How is she supposed to block out everyone she ever touched? Something would get through the cracks. No one has that much control. Not right away. And I always thought that these little peices would have to eventually blend together.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 10:58:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

awwwww, Logan's going to the prom LOL!

i know it's not supposed to be funny but it struck me that way. i think i was imagining corsages and powered blue tuxes and Foreigner playing on the stereo.

Author's Response: It was supposed to be one of those 'huh' moments. I wanted them to dress up, and, hello, they are in a school. Prom!!!!rnrnby your description of corsages and tuxes, I get the feeling your prom was a lot like mine!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 10:56:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

oooooh, the danger and strength of Phoenix might be what Logan wants?

fascinating! i never even considered that, but it makes sense. all that untamed power would be a good match for logan's ferocity. wow, good twist!

Author's Response: There always has to be some kind of doubt. Why would he see her as a woman now when he couldn't open his eyes before???

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 10:36:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

he totally deserved that ha ha!

Author's Response: Bobby always reminded me of that guy one particular jock in school, you know, the idiot who thinks he's the shit. I just couldn't resist hitting him.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 10:30:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

yeh, if i had telepathy i would've snooped on logan's thoughts too heh heh.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, me too. I don't think I would have been able to resist as long as Rogue did, either

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 10:04:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

"Emma got the feeling that this could have gone better if she had killed someone."

that is a GREAT closing line!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Just to knock the point of destruction home!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 10:00:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

ooooohhhhhh, Phoenix is evil.

and ripping adamantium from his bones? one of my fave (if horrifying) x-men stories from the comics!

amazing story so far!

Author's Response: I pulled out his bones to make a point, actually. Logan doesn't need his adamantium to be the big bad wolf of the mansion. Plus, it was one of my faves from the comic, too. I had to use it somewhere, and it helped explain later on when Rogue got her own bone claws.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 9:54:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

oooohhh, is it jean's natural affinity for Scott that is drawing Rogue to him and not just their shared pain?

and Logan is cool with Emma? innnnnntersting!

Author's Response: I've always liked the character of Scott, and I've always felt that he would have been a good guy if it hadn't been for the stick up his ass. I've always liked writing for him, and, plus, I was thinking about Rogue having her options open. With Logan and Emma, I didn't really see any reason for any animosity between the two in this story. I felt there was enough drama without pulling even more out of the comic.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 9:43:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

i just discovered this story and i am already entranced by the notion of Rogue killing the Phoenix. will what she took from jean drive Rogue mad? i can't wait to read the rest.

beware, i may comment a lot as i read, but i'm sure you'll appreciate the feedback if the rest is as good as this exciting first chapter!

Author's Response: I wanted to do a 'What If...'. I didn't like how the last movie ended, and I felt that the writers should have given Rogue more of a roll. But thanks for the reviews!!! They are always so helpful!

Reviewer: Kuroshikyo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2009 8:26:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That is one hellavu beginning.

Reviewer: LilaLaila Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 10:09:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

nice work. I am very curious to find out what happens next ^^

Reviewer: Sapphyre Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 4:30:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love that you wrote this! I couldn't help but wonder why they didn't put Rogue to use in movie. I can't wait to read more and see where you went with this.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2009 1:51:23 PM Title: Chapter 40

And fainted.

*LOL*

Good end.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2009 1:39:33 PM Title: Chapter 34

Noooooooo!

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Date: 02/27/2009 1:37:50 PM Title: Chapter 33

Mystique... what the...

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 10:04:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Such a nice way to wrap it up.......nice job! I really enjoyed this from the get go.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 5:15:42 AM Title: Chapter 40

Awwww. Nice.

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