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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2014 7:25:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sad. Heartbreaking. Cruel.

Wonderful story.

Reviewer: Epic Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2008 12:47:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, so sad. I cried while reading this. So much pain. You can only feel for the girl.

Author's Response: I do. Poor kid. I dealt with only three years of wearing long shirts and people avoiding me. I cannot immagine never being capable of touch.

Reviewer: Browneyedgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2008 6:52:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Powerful. You had me in tears before I finished reading.
'Then it occurred to him that maybe she had died Christmas day and her body was only now catching up'.


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Author's Response: Aww Thanks. I try to make what I'm writing powerful and enjoyable. 'Words are the portal to other worlds, the writer is the portal master' Thats what I want to be.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2008 9:16:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Unfortunately, very real. Some people are just cruel beasts with no common sense and no sense of decency (see comment by stupid kid in the story).

Only thing I don't believe is that no one other than Logan was there, at her funeral. Even Xavier, in his new body, should have been there; but Logan being the only one focuses the alone-ness, the solemnity, the futility in the question...."why".

Author's Response: That was the point of the story and the reason it's under AU

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2008 10:46:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

So. Freaking. SAD! Really well done, though.

Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry it's so sad though. Stupid dead plot bunny.

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