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Date: 05/31/2009 7:48:48 PM Title: Homecoming
MORE! MORE! MORE!!!! uh...yup, that's about all I'm thinking at the moment!
Author's Response: *grins* I'm really glad you're enjoying this story. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 11:18:33 AM Title: Homecoming
great chapter. i look forward to the next chapters. I wonder how it will work out!
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you're enjoying everything so far!
Date: 05/31/2009 6:59:38 AM Title: Last Call
who's excited? you need to ask? I am, I am!! =D
I guess I'm the only one who isn't super-thrilled because of the baby (sorry, I just don't like baby-fics...it's not that I don't like babies, coz who doesn't like babies, but...uh...yeah. I'll just shut up now), *but* I think you did a great job with getting the whole pregnancy thing into the story and making it feel *real*.
can't wait to see where you're taking this :)
Author's Response: You're on the same pags as my beta. As much as she hates babyfics, she loves this story. Now. It tore her up inside when I wrote the first few chapters and it was all hardcore angst. But she feels a lit like you.
I'm glad it worked out that well. The point of this story isn't the baby, it's the things they gotta learn along the way. Altough, with Marie going all nutso, I"m thinking they should sleep in the Danger Room. So things don't get sretroyed, but with Kitty subconciously phasing into it...
Date: 05/31/2009 3:28:41 AM Title: Homecoming
Awwww...
Author's Response: yeah... *gushes*
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2009 8:30:45 AM Title: Reemergence
They are ganna have some very hairy babies. xXx
Author's Response: They don't have to be hairy? Why does it have to be hairy? Marie isn't all that hairy.
Date: 05/28/2009 5:52:47 PM Title: Reemergence
awwww Logan babies (wow are you making it twins) hope to read the next chapter soon.
Author's Response: Mum's the word about Logan Babies...
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2009 11:05:20 PM Title: Reemergence
thanks for the new chapter. I'm lloking forward to many more soon!
Author's Response: I'm woring on one today! Hopefully I can get it to my beta before she gets really busy.
Date: 05/27/2009 6:27:32 PM Title: Reemergence
Well sometimes this pregnant thing happens *g*
Author's Response: *giggles* Yep. Imagine that!
Date: 05/27/2009 6:16:07 PM Title: The Saddest Revelation
heartbroken walking pain - wow, you really want marie to feel bad don't you.
and logan's here! yay! i love how he runs his hands over her - god, i'm pathetic.
Author's Response: LOL, I really wanted her to get her head out of her ass. Yes, Logan's here. *grins*
Date: 05/27/2009 5:48:49 PM Title: Space Hurts
here's my word fetish first, lets get that over an done with.
it was like saving face - love that line. a little pride that made you realise exactly how low Rogue is right now.
could charm the habit off a nun - lol. but yes. he could.
Everything’s burning - that line was HAWT. just perfect.
rogue is not in a good place right now is she, and the desperation she is exuding makes it look like she's running away from abuse which makes us notice how cowed she is. how she goes running when he calls, picks him up etc even though she thinks it's ovr jean. even how she had sex thinking he just wanted relief. kinda an abuse that she puts herself through.
how did you decide exactly how far is smell range would go - i've seen wolverine and the x-men and how powerful his sense of smell is there, but did you calculate it from somewhere? i'm most interested in the technical sides of things - it drives me nuts and makes me type strange things into google.
kinda feel sorry for logan at this point, more so then rogue even
Author's Response: Marie was definately 'Saving Face' here. She basically shamed herself for sleeping with him, because she wontonly threw herself into him. Like, when he realized he wasn't dreaming, and he would have stopped, she drew himin before he made the choice. She also feels shamed that she let herself be a second choice, runner-up, cheap replacement. Her wounded pride is what's making her not pick up the phone, and run from him, because she doesn't want him changing her mind because he feels he should. She's done what she's done and she'll live through her own type of torture, thank you very much. She doesn't need anyone telling her how messed up she is, or any of that because she's told herself over and over. SHe knows she hurt herself, and she thinks she probably hurt him too. She'd rather run away than deal.rnrn*grins* I like to think that I inject a specefic type of humor into my stories. Marie's mind and other characters display the type of sarcastic, off kilter, out of the blue mind rambling stuff that I think that people think of a constant daily basis, but would never say out loud. Except for those that do. Like Marie.rnrnWith the scent range... it's different. Dogs can trace a scent hours and maybe even days after it's left. It's less about haw far away you are and more about how many of the scent markers are left in the air without being whiped away by nature, something else, or just covered up really well. It mainly depends on how well the subject has trained their noses to specific scents, how good their natural abilities to detect such things are, and how well they can pair that particular skill with their other skills. Tracking, how well they know their prey. Things like that. Also, it depends on their particualr smell. I just go with what feels right for the character and what sounds right continuity wise. I don't think Logan relies soley on his sense of smell, more a combination of his sense of hearing and smell to pick out the differences in his surroundings. rnrnI felt horrible for Logan during this, because I knew that he wasn't sleeping, or eating reguralry and that Marie'd left basing her decisions on assumtpions and what she thought she knew of Logan, not what the Logan in her head could tell her. Firstly, because it was mostly erased with the cure, and secondly because it's been years since he's touched her to heal her. So she woulnd't know the new Logan anyways. rnrnEverything's Burning, is kind of a throwback to the part where I mentioned earlier how sensitive and unused to human touch her skin is. Everything would be multiplied, she's be more acute to texture and sensation that other would.rnrnThanks for the awesome review girly.
Date: 05/27/2009 1:07:43 PM Title: Last Call
First of all YAY you updated! and secondly, guess who! lol it's My Broken Quill who TMI'd you from fanfiction.com with the review that you deserve.
god, it's been a while since i've read this and i've decided to re-read it so i can give you a review as briliant as the delicious ones you give me - and of course because your story is tasty. McFlurry tasty ... that's some serious taste.
*'I wanted more than just almost’s and barely’s for the rest of my life'
I am a word junky, seriously i get shivers when people hit THAT spot, and that line just made me wish i had written it.
really brilliant start, you're rogue is very uh what's the word? ... prone to meloncholy. i like her, yet the fact that it's her that logan relies on to get him our of the rut he's in says a lot about her too.
and i also like the fact that the hints about who logan wants is quite subtle, even when you mention logan's messages we think like rogue and take it as the mumblings of a drunk guy. and i'm in love with the last hint, about him leaving his jacket.
one thing i've always had difficulty with is writing a drunk logan (and btw, you're drunk logan was HAWT!), i mean, how do you know after how much he gets drun by?
and finally - the sex. i like how you made it a blur, like it was too much for rogue to process. kinda overwhelming for her and how there are hidden 'i'll be back' kind of messages in his goodbye too.
okay, so my review wasn't as good as yours but i'm currently low on sleep and keep blinking like an owl lol. well i'll either see you at the nex chapter of LC or at P3 of my story. whichever comes 1st
mwah askita
Author's Response: Girl, how could I forget you. Sorry I haven't replied to your email. See... I've been busy. mmmmm.... McFlurries. Now you'e got me rereading it. She's very someone else said it nicely.. I can't remember if it was here or ff.net or LJ, but she's damaged. Nicely so. I tried to let the reader pick up on stuff Marie herself was thinking and saying without connecting the dots. I left it open ended so that there was no definitive anwser on how he gets drunk, we just know he does. (HAWT huh?) I prefer to write sex like that, you don't need sticky details, just the emotion and what's relevant to the plot line. *grins* see you next Chap!
Date: 04/08/2009 6:40:47 AM Title: Grande Cache
*girly sigh*
Author's Response: LOL, I'v got the first part of Chapter 6 out to my Beta, butshes on vacay, so I don't know when I'll get it up!
Date: 03/11/2009 9:34:38 AM Title: Grande Cache
I know you're going someplace with the body temp thing, askita, I just don't know where. I love how Logan is teaching her to learn and identify things with her new senses. I also love how he just laid it all out on the line when she asked about where to put her stuff. No BS, no hemming or hawing, just a straight shot "I almost screwed up, and it ain't gonna happen again!"
Author's Response: Going somewhere that I am, but I can't just lay it all out like that for you. You'll have to wait. *grins* I kinda always thought Logan was a, no BSing around kinda guy, he'd say what he had to say and you could take it. He wasn't going to soften the blow or anything. Plus, I think his logic is that if can't hurt any less to just say it in one go. LOL. Thanks for the great review, I really enjoy reading all your feedback.
Date: 03/10/2009 4:00:07 PM Title: Grande Cache
I just read all the chapters and...wow. I'm speechless.
so angsty and dramatic (especially the first few chapters) and so good! ...and I just wanna cry. no kidding.
you have a new fan as of right now ^^
Author's Response: Awesome, I'm so excited you're hooked. I just posted this one new, and I've got to finish another cahpter of my other WIP, 'Futures Unknown' before I post again. The first chapter was originally to be the end of the fic, but people clamored for more. Now there's a whole plot line instead of just angsty sex. *grins* Thanks bunches for your review!
Date: 03/10/2009 2:33:48 AM Title: Last Call
Okay its been a month and that was a good chapter to bring yourself back with-hope all is well on the vacation front and update update update!
Author's Response: I know it's been forever. I feel like a bitch. So sorry, everything is doing great and I have to work on 'Futures Unknown' before I can work on Last Call again. *grins* thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2009 7:22:51 PM Title: Grande Cache
More please xXx
Author's Response: Thank! I'll start on it as soon as I get Futures Updated!
Date: 02/11/2009 3:47:24 PM Title: Last Call
Pleeeaaaseee???? One more? Do I have to employ puppy dog eyes?
Author's Response: Don't worry, I"m gonna work on it tonight!
Date: 02/06/2009 2:02:18 AM Title: Piles of Worries
ahhhhhhhh!!! I cannot believe! CANNOT BELIEVE that you were surprised about receiving feedback for this story I mean its actually jut excellent!
Okay, the nitty gritty. Your Rogue is very damaged, not a little but a lot I mean the girl breaks down sobbing like every five minutes, but I do suppose that is the nature of Rogue.
I love the duality between these two characters, I love their heart ache and the cat and mouse game and I seriously love the last line of this chapter- great great ending right there. NOw as per instructions you simply will have to continue this or I will need to find and eliminate you ....well actually that doesn't guarantee me a chapter 5 so I shall find you and....force you into writing~ mwahahaha!!!
Seriously great works cookies and bean dip all round
Author's Response: Awww... Thanks for you kind words. *blushes* I tend to be very insecure about my writing. rnrnMarie really has some issues. She's working through what she has now, and there's a lot more to come. rnrnI'm trying to give everyone a view into each of their minds. I don't want to jump over into Logan's POV, although it's very tempting. Maybe after I finish this. Don't worry, I'm continuing, as soon as I write a chapter of Futures Unknown and get it posted. Hey, maybe you should head over there and tell me how you like it!rnrnThanks again for the review, I accept the cookies and bean dip (what a combo) and you won't need to kill me or force me to write, unless you want to come and babysit and clean the house so I can write. LOL :D
Date: 02/04/2009 4:09:10 AM Title: Piles of Worries
Everytime I read cabin I start thinking cabin of love... I can't help it ;)
Author's Response: *LOL* My beta and I have this running gag about the 'Love Shack'. I think that terri spoiled any and all cabins for everyone with her 'Love Cabin'. Regardelss, intresting things will definately happen at the cabin.
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 5:10:31 PM Title: Piles of Worries
ooh, getting exciting again!
liked the scene where she tried to cover herself up and flinched from his touch and he said “You don’t do that, not with me,”
and great twist with her now being on a mutant register book due to having gone and taken the cure.
still think she's pregnant, but now doubt her power will return, since it makes their lives rather difficult, but rather think that she's getting the enhanced Wolvie powers thanks to the baby she's carrying.
Author's Response: Everyone thinks I can't add more angst... Hmmmm. LOL I'm glad you're liking the new turn of events, but not everything's candy and sweets all the time! Thaks for reviewing so much, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 4:52:35 PM Title: The Saddest Revelation
I find it really hard to swallow that she would not have looked through his jacket pockets at all for the whole month that she'd been on the run and sleeping with his jacket, and that she only now heard the rustling of the paper. Sorry!
I also struggle with coincidences such as the perfect timing of his arrival to save her from the clerk.
I'm not sure whether this is coming to a close now or whether it's going to get better..
Author's Response: I had my husbands coast for the enitre year of 2005 while he was deployed in Iraq, and didn't lokoin them until two weeks before he came home. She's not been paying attnetion to much. Logan was very far away from her when he got the text. And he did as she told him, went to the desk before he went to her room.
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 4:39:17 PM Title: Space Hurts
Mmm, not as gripping as the first chapter as the descriptive running away is very lengthy, but am interested to see what happens when he catches up to her and whether she's going to turn out pregnant and get her powers back..
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 4:27:45 PM Title: Last Call
Wow, impressively angsty!
and I loved this sweet description:
"He set my blood on fire and did his best to quench the flames."
Author's Response: *grins* It was meant to be an angsty One Shot, to make people cry. But they demanded more, and I had an idea swiming around in my head, and Lord knows I can't make people suffer willingly. *grins* I'm really glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2009 8:14:19 AM Title: Piles of Worries
More please xXx
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on it!
Date: 02/02/2009 7:51:36 AM Title: Piles of Worries
I'm thinking he's mostly worried about Marie, but with everything they still have to discuss it's understandable that she's reading more into his worry than is necessary.
Keep it coming, askita, I love this!
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad. I've got this whole.. 'I love this story and really want to write it, but I'm scared to death everyone will hate it' complex going. He's definately worried about Marie, and fairly unsure about what he's going to tell her. Just cause he says he's gonna make everything alright, doesn't mean he knows how. LOL Also, Marie is definately freaking, she keeps wanting to talk, and it seems like he's avoiding the subject. And with these two's history, they're definately goning to jump to conclusions. *rolls eyes* They can't ever seem to get anything straight.