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[Report This]Date: 02/23/2009 2:11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
"I sighed happily and fell asleep, safe in his arms."
AHHHH!!! I don't even have another word for it!!!! Wonderful balance between intimacy and pure mushy love! Hey now I was using that paper bag to breath again but it wasn't cause of shock this time! Whew! That was just like HOT and seriously what girl wouldn't want to be sharing Logan's massive bed! I get the feeling MR. Logan has more money then we've been led to believe oh but I hope he doesn't find one of her lists or something and find out about her plot with Bobby-even if it is so obviously discarded now
Love this chapter, love your writing, have a nice hiatus and come back with a rocking chapter 16!
Here have some chocolate chip cookies with reeses pieces! you've earned em!
Author's Response: hey... reeses are my favorite chocolate candy! thanks for the review, amanda. i'm still nervous about the whole thing-- i don't feel like it came out quite right--- but maybe a lot of that has to do with the first time jitters. when i figure out what i'm doing for 16, i'll try not to disappoint you. :)
Date: 02/23/2009 12:05:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
You win a gold star...don't worry, it all turned out fine.
I'm glad you've gotten these chapters out as quick as you have...now go and take your well deserved break =)
Author's Response: thank you for the gold star. the last gold star i was ever given was in the first grade when i spelled 'uniform' correctly. and now i'm getting a gold star for writing smut. ha!
Date: 02/23/2009 11:57:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love this story, please keep going.
Author's Response: thanks, jen.
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2009 10:03:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
More please xXx
Author's Response: there will be more to come eventually.
Date: 02/23/2009 9:25:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love you.....I got consummation for my birthday present, way better than the simple kiss I requested as a present earlier.
It was hot. Very. HOT.
Author's Response: lol. hey, i told you there was a good chance a kiss would happen. i just left out the fact that there was a godo chance other stuff would happen as well. ;)
Date: 02/23/2009 8:57:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
for the first time this was fantastic!!!!! I loved this chapter. Makes me wish Logan would come fall in love with me.
Author's Response: i think i could manage some logan lovin' over here as well...
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2009 3:09:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
WOW Okay yeah I'm sitting here plotting your destruction because you actually ended it there and I have this brown paper bag I'm breathing into but it isn't working! I almost fell off my chair and had a heart attack- yeah know when your REALLY into a story and you're just reading every word really carefully and then you keep scrolling down and suddenly there's no more DOWN cause you've reached the end of the story without even realizing it? And suddenly your breathing in and out of a paper bag b.c you're having a panic attacK? No...never had that happen? eh ?
But hey I'm so happy for you- 11 reviews just for this chapter-so far!- and you've written 54,000 some-odd words really congratulations it's a great story- you gotta be proud!
Now, I'm sorry but if there isn't an update by Monday at midnight I'm going to have to start plotting your demise-I can't believe you ended it there-obviously you're trying to kill me!
I do love you're Logan- his blunt revelation of his feelings for Marie could only be made believable by you and in this story- you created a really great Logan and I loved this whole chapter! The part where Logan licked her lip? I DID FALL OFF MY CHAIR! Seriously, that almost killed me but not as much as when the story ended like 10 lines later! UPDATE LADY
Author's Response: i loved writing this chapter. it is my favorite by far. i'm glad that you and everyone else seemed to enjoy it as well. and thanks for your kind words about Logan. you are too sweet. now then, put the paper bag down and check your inbox. i'm posting ch.15 asap. :D
Date: 02/23/2009 12:14:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lightbulb moments! -click- Those are fun. About time Marie figured out she was being a complete and total idiot trying to get Bobby back. I'm going to love reading the next chapter when it comes up.
Author's Response: haha, yeah, marie has been a bit slow in this story hasn't she? I mean, come on. There's Logan. And then there's Bobby. ..... is that really such a hard decision?? :P
Date: 02/23/2009 12:13:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved the way you had Logan 'tell' Marie how he felt about her with the art museum. I liked the a/n which said it was au so you could do what you wanted anyway...those are some of the best stories I think.
Look forward to reading the next chapter right away
Author's Response: thanks, rhiannon. :) i'm still on the fence about the museum scene myself, but mostly i feel like it came out okay. i hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint you.
Date: 02/22/2009 7:07:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great Job! I can't wait until the next hapter. I'm hoping that there's lots of updates in my Inbox when I get back. *grins*
Author's Response: thank you! and nice subtlety, by the way. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 6:46:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW! More please xXx
Author's Response: it's on the way soon. :D
Date: 02/22/2009 6:25:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
They should forbid people from posting one chapter at a time!!! Serius, it's torture!!!
PS: this is my way of BEGGING you to not take a break :o) Please!!!
Love the story, it's absolutely fabulous!!! You are an amazing writer!!
I've registered here only to ask you to please don't stop it now!!!
Author's Response: oh wow--- what a compliment for you to register just for my story. :o thank you so much for the feedback and the support. i'm so glad that you are enjoying it so much!!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 4:09:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh, you are evil. (but, then again, this is my own evil-author-in-a-different-fandom karma coming back to get me. oh, sweet irony.)
I have been waiting all day for this chapter and will be waiting all tomorrow for the next one. D:
but then again, this is fantastic and quality does in fact time. so... rush, but don't? I don't know. I'm rambling.
Author's Response: well, i finished writing and editing 15 today so yes, it will be posted tomorrow. but like i've told the others... after 15 is posted i am taking my long-talked-about break. no, really. i mean it. what? i'm serious this time.
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 3:07:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
EVIL!!!!!!!!!!! how can you just leave it like that, i mean....... please we need chapter 15.
I've been thinking (which is very bad in my case) that maybe Logan worked out what Marie was up to but trying to get Bobby jelous and thats why he wont kiss her, not until he knows she wants to be with him for him and not for Bobby.
also, what happen to pizza with scott and jean or is that still to come?????
Author's Response: you should know by now that i don't give anything away. ;) however, i'm humbled to hear that you're invested enough into the story that it makes you curious to know and figure out what happens next in their lives. :D
Date: 02/22/2009 1:38:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh yes please take no breaks, this fic is just awesome, and luv your udpates. I can't tell you how much I enjoy reading this Logan. The chemistry is just perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: no, no, the break is indeed coming (sorry!). but not until after the next chapter is posted. so you'll get one more (hopefully a good one) to tie you over for a while. :D
Date: 02/22/2009 1:31:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
I"m glad she's finally come to her senses about the Bobby mess. That was driving me really really crazy. *grins* Great job so far!
Author's Response: thanks for feedback. :D
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 11:10:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
yay, that was hot!
I hope Bobby walks in on them on his way out and gets very jealous ;)
I object to them throwing around 'i love yous' so freely within 3 dates though.. especially Marie!
Can't wait for the next chapter...
please don't take a break from this story! ;)
Author's Response: okay, normally i would completely agree about the "I love you" thing. But keep in mind my intention for this story is meant to be light and fluffy. it took me about 10 chapters just to get them in the same room together... you can imagine how long it would have taken before i properly gave them time to 'date' before the Big Three words were shared. Also, i set up the time frame for the story from the get go. She has 2 weeks to accomplish her goals. Yes, that's silly but the whole concept behind this story is, too. So I don't feel too bad about the Big Three. If I ever do another story there will be no time frame-- espcially a 2 week one--- and i'll be able to focus more on the individual characters. But as this fic stands... well, it is what is it. And it's my first ever story so I'm learning as I go. THANK YOU for the feedback. It gives me a lot to think about and consider for future writing.
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 10:39:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh, poor Logan!
She pushes and pushes and then shoves him away :( At least she's being honest though. Nicely done!
I hope he doesn't call her now and she hsa to call him if she's interested ;)
I don't think I liked the museum visit though. It works for the purpose of Logan showing Marie that he wants a soul mate and isn't just a sex bod, which seems to be what she currently sees him as, but it doesn't seem to fit.
Not because Logan can't be wordly as well as brawny, but because it seems that you're trying to give him a depth which will make him approvable to the parents. I would prefer it if if wasn't approvable but Marie loved him enough to tell her parents to stuff their requirements.. much more romantic ;)
Oh, and when did Logan and Marie first meet? We only saw him show up when she was breaking up with Bobby, but when did he first see her and know she was the one? and why did he think she felt it too.
ps: I like how Jean is so competent she can make Marie what she considers a complicated cup of coffee ;)
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review. as for the museum thing--- that really wasn't my intention at all, but because i've tried to keep this story pretty airy, i can see how it's open to that interpretation. i wasn't trying to reflect any of marie's parental approvement requisites on the date. it was just logan sharing something of himself with her.
Date: 02/22/2009 9:44:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: does that mean you like it? :P
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 9:25:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
He he, that was a hot date!
I love the dialogue, it's brilliantly dragged out verbal foreplay :)
and I love Logan holding out on her..
I hope he doesn't kiss her until he gets himself invited to meet her parents! ha ha, *evil laugh* either that or she has to give in and kiss him first.
Oh, and Scott is so likeable in this, he makes me laugh.
Author's Response: thanks. :D
Date: 02/21/2009 10:23:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Take this outright groveling and begging for what it is, but my birthday is Monday and I would reeeeeeaaaaalllllly like them to kiss by then.
I'm just sayin'........
Author's Response: you what what? that may actually be arranged. ;)
Date: 02/21/2009 8:30:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I"m really liking this so far! Great job! I plan on getting most of it read tonight!
Author's Response: thanks so much! i hope read what you needed to because i'm about to add another chapter to the heap.
[Report This]Date: 02/21/2009 12:43:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
WHAT!!!! OHHHH no, no, no, NO Bad Marie, very bad Marie, how could she just... i mean...WHAT!!!
Oh we need chapter 14 PLEASE we need it
Author's Response: pretty please, with a cherry on top, right? :P i promise to post the next chapter this weekend. which is half over. so, you know, there's not much more waiting to take place.
Date: 02/21/2009 11:47:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story has me hooked. It has everything that a good romance needs...humor, drama, lust, and of course the possibility of true love. I love that Logan won't kiss her...the anticipation is killing Marie (and me) but there is something very romantic and erotic by them almost kissing but pulling back at the last second.
You are a wonderful writer...have you thought about writing professionally...because if not you should consider it.
Author's Response: what a compliment! thank you so much, leslie-- but i'm no 'real' writer. this is my first story and just for fun. :) and i'm so glad to have you enjoying this little fic-baby of mine. i hope to keep you on the line now that you're hooked.
Date: 02/21/2009 10:43:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
YOU. ARE. SO. MEAN!
I can't believe you just left it there. And Rogue, needs to pull her head out of her butt! Jean is already Jealous of her and Logan's relationship. She's already one that little battle. She doesn't need her parents approval as well! She's starting to grate on my nerves. lol
Author's Response: hah. yeah, i figure we're all the same page by now. which is why you'll really love me once the next chapter is posted. hhmmm, i just got an idea for 15... no, no. i won't write it today, i can't. i'm on break, right?