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Date: 02/21/2009 9:12:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
THATS WHERE YOU ENDED IT?!?!?!?
REMEMBER WHAT I SAID ABOUT NOT TRYING TO KILL PEOPLE?!?!
I'm going to go get meatballs and throw them at you! You just need to understand...you can't do that without warning a girl! Where's chapter 14-ahh!
Okay I'm breathing in and out breathing, I'm okay, everythings going to be fine ::whoooooo::
Okay, favorite lines in this chapter: I wanted to be her. Limp, on a bed, with perky nipples.
Other than that, again I LOVE your Logan I WORSHIP him-oh would you happen to know the name of the Chagall painting they saw? I'd love to see- your description really made inspires curiosity in the reader-hehe
Author's Response: thanks again for the feedback. i'll probably post 14 tomorrow. i don't want to post it any sooner because then i'll feel obligated to start the next chapter this weekend and, well, i need a break. even if it is only one day. haha.rnrnas for the painting, it is by Marc Chagall and it is titled: "Traum der Liebenden". which, loosely translated, means 'dream of the loving'. to be honest, i'm not a huge fan of Chagall's work but this painting strikes a cord with me and tugs at my heart strings. it's beautiful. everything around them--- the swirls, the bridge, the clouds, the tree, the flowers--- if you look close you can see countless images of faces and couples intermingled. Sigh.
[Report This]Date: 02/21/2009 8:44:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ooooooh. I hope she tells her parents that she's not with Bobby anymore. That way she and Logan can finally stop stalking around each other.
Author's Response: the question i suppose is how long can i keep playing with their heads until I stop making them circle each other. ;)
Date: 02/21/2009 1:05:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow... hot hot hot. I'm dying for this kiss to happen!! I can't believe how much I'm enjoying your fic - AU without powers is not my cup of tea (at least it wasn't before), but I'm dying to read more! Hope you update again soon.
Author's Response: seriously, you all are about as obsessed with this kiss as Marie is. lol. i'm flattered that you've made SoA an exception to your usual dislike of AU fics. i hope you not only continue reading but that you enjoy the rest of the chapters-to-come as well.
Date: 02/20/2009 8:53:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man! At 9am I checked my mail as I was gettin ready for my Botany class-from HELL and I saw you updated but I was rushing so I couldn't read it but now I just did, yeah!
Magical meatballs work! A boulder needs to fall off a cliff and hit bobby on the head and MARIE AND LOGAN NEED TO KISS DAMIT! OMG-Yeah that whole parking lot scene- so frustrating! I would have jumped the man by now!
Author's Response: sorry you had to suffer through Botany before you could indulge in some quality fic time, :( but i'm glad you enjoyed it. now, stop wishing death upon poor Bobby and make me some more meatballs. i need more brain power before i can properly connect Logan's lips to Marie's...
Date: 02/20/2009 4:27:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
ohh, this just keeps getting better and better. I love Logan's resistance but dang how can he resist her. LOL Hope we get some kissage next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks for the complimenting feedback--- but i'm not hinting in either direction whether or not there'll be kisses going on in the next chapter. you'll just have to be surprised. :)
Date: 02/20/2009 11:21:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh man I luv the interaction between Scott and Marie, it's just perfect. "Do I need to be close to a phone in case they only allow you one call?" what a classic line. I luv that Scott knows her so well.
I just luv the Logan in this so intense and sweet at the same time, it's the perfect balance. more, please.
Author's Response: thank you so much. more is on the way. you all should know by now that i can't seem to stop myself from pushing out a chapter a day. sigh. whatever happened to my real life?
[Report This]Date: 02/20/2009 10:37:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm so excited I'm clapping my hands like a little kid. I can't even write intelligently.
Author's Response: thank you. :D
Date: 02/20/2009 9:37:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Best date ever. I love how he's making Marie crazy with lust. Their interaction is really sweet at this point so I can easily see how smoking hot it'll be when they finally kiss and more.
Author's Response: "when they finally kiss and more"<--- heh, it's funny how you assume that they will not only kiss but that they'll be doing extra stuff as well. Who knows, maybe you'll be right. :p
[Report This]Date: 02/20/2009 8:50:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yummy MacGyver
Author's Response: agreed.
[Report This]Date: 02/20/2009 8:49:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Argh! Why is he waiting to kiss her?! I'm dieing for a good Logan/Marie Kiss!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 02/20/2009 12:41:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Drunk Jean stripping on top of a BAR.......you freakin' *rule*!!! I laughed out loud so many times reading this chapter that my husband think I am nuts.
The sexual chemistry and tension Logan and Marie have is amazing.
Author's Response: thank you for the feedback and i'm pleased to hear that you find it so entertaining. :) more logan and marie to come shortly...
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 11:40:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
ah!!!! !!!!
Okay this review is for chapter 10 & 11- don't beat yourself up about 10 so much it was informative, I'm computer savvy myself and hey I've seen the inside of a few strangers e-mails ; ) yea the dork who couldn't figure out the < > codes, but I never knew that tid bit about the bluetooth thing- but I'd heard about it- thats interesting.
Also, you have an explosive vocabulary, you throw in these really sophisticated words and it really spices things up descriptively speaking. Such as:
saccharine, and sequestered, and inquisitiveness. Those are some of my favorites from Chp.10 but I equally enjoyed chapter 11 and pseudo, perusals
and rakishly-F.Y.I Logan grinning rakishly down at Marie- yeah just send someone with a mop to come clean me up b.c I was a puddle on the floor
Awesome-ness achieved and seriously I don't want to see Logan get hurt if he finds out Marie's plan- too bad so sad sorta deal- I LOVE THIS LOGAN usually I throw people cookies or cakes but I'm going to throw you a meat ball because it's brain food!
So take your hunk of meat and my praises and go! GO write another chapter!!!
Author's Response: 1) I don't know if i got the Bluetooth thing completely right--- i've never done anything like that myself (honestly) but i think i wrote it pretty close to correct from what i've read online. 2) thanks for all the compliments and the hunk of meat. haha. i would have preferred a hunk of Logan.... but yeah, i'll take what i can get. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 10:19:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, this is really good :)
This chapter was really fun and very hot! Logan being all over her yet not jumping her bones at her offer was great. You've got us wanting more too!
I'm glad he didn't take offence when Jean said Bobby was the kind of guy their parents would approve, but I hope he picked up on it and realises he's got his work cut out for him ;)
Oh, and the first 6 chapters despite being fun were torturous due to the minimal Logan appearances.. I'm so glad I found this story at this stage where I get to enjoy the fruits of patience without the wait, hee hee ;)
Warren is hilarious, but such a letch!
I wonder if Scott and Jean have met yet or if they will spark when they do..?
What else? Oh yeah, I hope the story will tell us why Logan was attracted to Marie from just seeing her with Bobby.. since he couldn't have known she'd be anything special at the time. It's intriguing, since we're told he's so hot and all the women are interested, what made her stand out to him?
Author's Response: oh good, you caught all sorts of little things i threw out there. ;) and you have so many good questions---- but i don't want to give anything away just yet
Date: 02/19/2009 9:38:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aw, I can't believe you didn't like the way this chapter turned out. It was hilarious.
Author's Response: thanks. :^)
Date: 02/19/2009 8:10:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow what a hot chapter I really like the hole car scene, I think I've read that part at least 4 times already. I'm always checking for updates. Luv the story line and I hope that Marie, takes her head out of her ass and forgets all about bobby before Logan loses interest. Can't wait to read about what they are doing in the afternoon. ;)
Author's Response: thank you for the response and i'm honored you like it enough to read parts of it more than once. :D the next chapter will be up tonight or tomorrow. keep your eyes open for it!
Date: 02/19/2009 4:57:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love how Logan and Marie are. I do wish she would give up her plan though. Jean getting drunk was hysterical. Love that Warren was 'charmed' by Jean. LOL Update soon!!!
Author's Response: i think you'll like the next chapter. Marie finally begins to change her mind about things.
Date: 02/19/2009 3:15:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think I might possibly leave my husband for your verison of Logan.Lol. Let me tell you I never died throughout half of that last chapter. Question though are you going to have Scott and Jean meet up sometime and they fallen for each other? I am just curious on that one.
Author's Response: hey--- i can't give away all my secrets can i? maybe Scott and Jean will, maybe Scott and Jean won't. I guess you'll just to have to read to find out. ;p
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 2:42:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
OOOOOOO she has to tell her perents she dumped Bobby, I mean come on let her bring Logan home instead.
I dont know why but the relationship between Marie and Jean sounds just like me and my older sister, right down to the partents thinking shes better lol.
Cant wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: i don't know whether i should be glad or sympathetic that you can relate to something going on in this story. haha.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 1:21:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my god! Warren is such a man slut and who knew Jean had that in her. I like how Rogue and Logan are getting it on.
Author's Response: i'm having fun playing with Logan and Rogue for sure. Things may get more interesting from here on...
Date: 02/19/2009 9:20:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
She's really losing it isn't she?
Author's Response: yeah, but i figure everyone has a teetering point. this was her going off the ledge of sanity in the rush of the moment. didn't come out like i wanted, but oh well.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 4:17:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is a very well crafted story. I like it... a LOT!! Please hurry up with the getting logan and Marie together.... :D and of course... the next chapter... :D thanks.
Author's Response: thank you for the support. i'm doing the best i can in pushing them together from this point on!
Date: 02/19/2009 12:23:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Okay-back!!!
I don't even mind the lack of Logan/Marie...see look...this is me not minding- barely mentioning it at all....not like I'm DYING.For.More or anything......
......
LoL I do enjoy a good explaining chapter-I hope Jean ends up with Warren they deserve each other. Oh he is so totally gross by the way-pushy guys = the worse
The Toes thing with the "their like little candies" O.O...no no sorry Bobby can go be homosexual with a severed foot in a closet somewhere-far from Rogue.
Oh, by the way, I left it out of my last chapter but when I re-read chapter 8- ya know withdrawal can be a real bitch sometimes hehe*- I was mega impressed with your Logan- very real and down to earth, a great example of what Logan would be like without all the feral animal growly-ness with the extra baggage of no memories and the unknown age and the nightmares filled with metal and needles and doctors oh my- he seems real, and again HE DRIVES A MUSTANG- but really he does seem like A+, gold star, extremely 100% authentic Logan- you definitely hit the nail on the head.
Okay, think I said everything I wanted to say, I'm just gonna wrap it up now. can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Craving it like a heroin addict who ran out of needles ;)
Author's Response: thanks for the detailed feedback. im actually really glad that you said what you did about Logan because that was exactly what i was going for. :D
Date: 02/18/2009 11:59:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
ahhh!!!! You updated!! I haven't even read it yet but I'm so excited I had to come say YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!! BRB!
Date: 02/18/2009 7:31:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Man her parents need to get a clue. And she needs to learn to accept herself for who she is without being weighed down by her parents judgements.
Sorry. My folks are the same way and I spent years trying to please them before giving it up and just pleasing myself.
Author's Response: my parents are the same way. AND i have an older sister. so i guess you could say i'm poorly taking out some of my frustrations on the characters in my fic. ;)
Date: 02/18/2009 12:14:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
OK- I just got around to reading this chapter because of scheduling conflicts and partially due to my six hours a week of Botany-and I'm a business major- I.hate.college. Rapidly Digressing-I'd like to tell you that I don't think its very nice when one person tries to kill another person. For example, cutting of the chapter at the place wher you left it- not very nice, good example of me trying not to die of shock and grief.
I'm mean seriously I've been anxiously waiting for more Logan and Marie and that little bit of talk goin on at the hockey game was a nice tie-over but OMG!! The bar scene was so0o0o0o sweet! I was all melty and happy and envious! But then when he put his hand over her's and said "go out with me again" oh my gawd! PLUS THE MAN DRIVES A MUSTANG!!!!! AH!!!
This is a great story and I just think if you don't want me dead you should continue it before I cry. Like really now, c'mon! Please thank you and....hurry!
Author's Response: haha, okay, that was a damn fun response! and no, i don't want you dead or crying so i promise to start writing the next chapter with a renewed sense of purpose. :) chapter 9 should be up and ready soon.