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Glad to have you back :)
I went back and reread this story. Honestly when you first posted it, I thought 'the Kid' was going to be Rogue. I am glad she isn't. What her mutation is and what other mutations Rogue may have interests me quite a bit at this point. I would love to know why Charles banished her. Nice to see you back!
Cant wait to find out what is between the Prof, Abigail and Rogue.
Can't wait for the next chapter
I really hope you update. I want to see where this goes.
Im loving this story so far. Im a fan of dominant protective Logan, please continue! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Im gonna try and up date this soon, hopefully before christmas. So keep an eye out.
I would love to see more of this. Very well done.
~Mia
Author's Response: Thanks for the feed back. More should be on the way soon, so watch this space
This is good so far. I hope you'll continue it. My only complaint if the kid didn't have a bag, did she have her papers, and if not as I assume how did they get her into Canada. If so couldn't they use them to get her name.
Author's Response: Hey there, I will continue with the story I'm half way through a chapter but I've got a bad case of writers block at the mom. With the papers and such, I proberly should of explained it more my fault. Logan had an envlop with the safe house detail and such along with some fake papers, different names and such which could be changed. The children were told which cars to go to (apart from the Kid who Logan took). Thank you for pointing that out to me I will write it into the next chapter to explain it all.
I like it! Please update soon!!
I like it. Some formatting issues make it difficult for me to read (multiple lines of space between each paragraph, and the italics tag isn't closed in Chapter 4, which puts the last few chapters in italics in the Print Story version), but once I copypasta'd it into a text editor it was a very fun story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yah sorry about that I tried to fix it many times but couldn't it as driving me mad. Thanks for the review
That was close... too close...
So happy she didn't die... *sniff, sniff*
Author's Response: Yah I couldn't be that mean Thanks for the review
This is a great story. I love everything bout it. Please continue!! I'm waiting for the revealing of The Kid's powers!
Yay you're still continueing this story. It's really a great idea and with really good writing. I can't wait to see more. Although these tiny chapters are probably going to drive me nuts. Oh well maybe I'll just wait until you either have several chapters at once for me to read or even better have finished the story. I really hope that that doesn't happen until this fic is really long though. The idea of Wolverine having to take care of all these kids especially the little one. It's just mind boggling. I really really really really really really really really really can't wait for more. Especially with this cliffhanger. What ever you do please, please, keep going until you finish it even if it doesn't seem like very many people are reading your fic. Besides once it's finished I plan to rec it on on of those rec sites (I have on in mind but for some reason I just can't remember the name right now, ah well it's bookmarked.) but they only take finished work or very long wip's that have a chance of being finished or are worth reading anyway. So please finish. And remember that sooner or later I will come back looking for more. Probably sooner. And even though I probably won't leave another review right then I will be looking to read more. And then once you finish it I'll probably read the entire thing at once. I have a feeling this fic could end up becoming one of my favorites that I periodically come back to and re-read again and again. I really wish there were a lot more fics like this one out there. Of any kind. It certainly seems that the plot premise of Logan having to take care of a bunch of the students on his own would appeal to a lot of people. Since there are so many stories you could write about them. From short stories to novellas to novels so to speak. In fact I was really surprised that when I tried to search for fics that have Logan on his own with a bunch of the students that I wasn't able to find any really. Except a couple of extremely short one shots that weren't very good. Anyway keep up the great writing. Or at least keep writing even if you think what you write stinks just keep writing anyway. It causes the creative juices to flow and then you can always go back and edit it or rewrite it or something. If needed. By the way I give honest ratings so you aren't ever going to get a ten unless you actually finish this story. I'm going to give you an 8 but I'm still debating if that shouldn't be a 9 because it's so good but the shortness of it just kind of takes away. Oh ya while I was just writing this I remember that the higher a rating you get from more people the more likely more people are to read you fic and they should read it so consider an 8 maybe a 9 your real rating and the 10 I'm giving you a publicity boost.
Author's Response: WOW that is like the lngest review I have ever got thank you so much for it. As for chapter 6, I have finished it, had it finished along with chapter 5 BUT i sort of forgot to send to my beta *hides from anything being throughn* and dont worry I do plan to finish this story, it was eating at me for about a yr lol. Im nearly dont with work and will have 6 weeks so a lot more will be coming out for the summer. Thank you so much for the review i was having a real shitty day and it made my day.rnrnP.S. about the longer chapters I will try but I feel like im feeling it out just for the sake of it. But there is a more to come dont worry :D
oh wow... you have to update soon like before ten tonight (Pacific) so that I can read it while i'm at work. great cliff hanger!!!!
oh god, this is getting good!
Damn!
Author's Response: Like it then?
Interesting story!
Oooo I love it! Please update soon! I wana know what's up with "Kid"!
Please up date soon!
I don't think I can wait that long. Where is Roguy (pleading eyes)?
Really can't wait until the next one! Beautiful writing
Author's Response: Thank you so much, but all created goes to my beta Wolf for making my writing readable lol.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
On another note, great start for this fic. can't wait till next sun. for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I'll try my best to get it done for sunday
Really hope you update soon!!!! It looks like it's going to be a good one to follow!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I should have the next chapter done by the weekend if your willing to wait. Sadly real life work has just jumped on me today lol.rn