The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Wow. Hot and gorgeous fic! Just fantastic!!
Wonderful and HOT story! Definitely putting this on me favourites for some re-reads in the future when I'm feeling a bit down.. hehe ;)
Geez, I wish I could just let Muzzow's comment go, but I can't. Honey, if you ain't grinnin' during hot monkey love with a man the likes of Logan, then you ain't doin' it right! Trust me, he could put a grin on my face that you couldn't get off with a crowbar! --Wendie
So HOT! I love how Rogue took the lead and knew just what he needed, knew that his healing factor couldn't do anything for his heart, but she could. Excellent. --Wendie
Uhhh... sorry, no... too unrealistic behavior (I never met someone who's grinning in the throes of ecstasy and passion, but that's just one example of what went wrong). Everythings reads as if you were in a frenzied hurry to get this fic online. Some fleshing out would have been nice.
that was hot!
the urgency was palpable, and somehow seemed more realistic than dragged out fluff.