logan, a prince? yeah you really can't be serious ;)
it's a nice idea though, i kind of like it =)
wonder who katina is....and where they're going...and lol @ rogue for breathing heavy when he takes the shirt off hehe...logan is so clueless sometimes!

one thing though, you kind of switch between the times when you're writing...like in the last paragraph, "she said..." and then "Logan grabs". it happens really easily, especially when you're all caught up in your story *g* but you might wanna pay attention to that, it's easier to read when it's all in one time :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip! It's just nice to see people actually read my stories and don't just skim through it like my friend who started betareading for me!