This was just sooo . . . perfect. I loved reading every bit of it. It's a great take on the Logan/Rogue relationship. Lovely job with the characterizations, too. :)

Very satisfyingly violent without making that the whole focus. Very original in the story of her leaving. I really enjoyed reading this. It was masterfully written. Thank you for sharing.

~Mia

Really liked this one, and your depiction of Logan as being all sensory, distant, just seeking some calm. The way he and Rogue meet and their relationship evolves was great.

Also liked how your Logan isn't perfect and he did do some bad things in the past, and that Rogue gets to see it.

I struggled with the bit about Logan's leg being mangled and then not healing correctly so he's left crippled, because if his healing was limited to only his skin patching up then he would always have bits left inside himself, like bullets, splinters, etc, as his skin would just heal over them, which we know is not the case. In the movie they show how his body pushes out the bullet in his forehead before the wound heals over.
However, if anyone can hurt Logan, Magneto can, so I suspended my disbelief and enjoyed the rest of the story ;-)