I can DEFINITELY see that as a follow up to "Don't Make Me"! Loved the beginning, you really had me going until '...his glasses...'   WHAT?!?!?  OMG!!

Then Logan finally realizing the hole he's buried himself in, so deep he didn't even see. And that line!!  "You gonna walk away when I'm tryin'?"  PERFECT!!

Another nicely ambiguous ending where us shippers can easily envision our favorite couple living happily ever after!!

I liked the start, the way it was ambiguous for a while so we could think it was Logan.

and lots of good lines, e.g.
Logan's dig "Breakin' up the morning after don't count as not cheatin', sweetheart."
and later his reply to her saying that his excuse is wearing thin; "You gonna walk away when I'm tryin'?"

Nice ending, with her shaking him up by making him realise that he's wasting precious time given their lives are way shorter than his.