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[Report This]Date: 08/28/2014 10:48:11 PM Title: Always On My Mind
I don't know if you receive comments or messages any more, but I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story, and how talented you are! What's even more amazing is that you wrote this when you were 17.
I love your Rogue voice, and the way you allowed the story of Rogue's coming of age and relationship with Logan unfold in such a real and believable way. I also liked the way you portrayed Rogue's inner struggle with her powers and the people she absorbed. The way you showed the country's debate over the MRA and hatred/fear of mutants was very realistic.
I really liked the ending, and how it leaves us open to a real possibility of a positive future for Logan and Rogue....but I admit I would have really loved to see an epilogue! :)
Awesome story--thank you for all your hard work!
[Report This]Date: 08/29/2011 1:29:38 AM Title: The Long and Winding Road
Oh no! Its over? You always end it in just the right place as to drive me nuts with the possibilities. Like the Dark Side of the Moon, This series was very well done. Kudos.
[Report This]Date: 10/20/2010 5:00:56 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road
Oh that's beautiful. I do wish I knew what the job was that she was rushing off to do. Please, please post chapter 8 again so that I can know. This was truly enjoyable; spending the day in this universe. Thank you. It's hard to believe at times, the immense talent a teenager can have. Especially when it exceeds my own in this area. Thank you, again, for sharing it with us.
~Mia
Date: 10/20/2010 4:29:50 PM Title: Here Comes The Sun
I believe that your posted chapter 7 twice and no chapter 8. It makes a mildly confusing transition into chapter 9 here. Just thought I'd nosy my way over and tattle to you.
~Mia
Author's Response: Oh man, I did not even realize I'd done that! Thanks so much for letting me know. I've fixed it. Luckily it wasn't a completely vital chapter.
Date: 04/10/2009 12:50:36 AM Title: Always On My Mind
Sinatra-I Got The world On a String
Expert Choice- it was the song i never would of thought of and the song that made perfect sense for her to play
As I'm sure your aware I'm a fan of your earlier work but I'm a big fan of your current work too- like The Dark Side of the Moon.... hint hint....get going sparky!!!
Author's Response: Haha! No worries, I'm on it! I'm actually backtracking, though. Before finishing "Great Gig in the Sky," I want to fill in that three-week gap between "Money" and "Breathe" with "Any Color You Like" (four chapters). Logan and Rogue. In a cabin. It demands to be written!
Date: 04/09/2009 11:10:26 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road
Huh. Well, that was different. Not bad, but different. Interesting characterisation of Rogue; it rang true for me in some ways (what with the whole immature teenager thing), but a little jarring in others (the way you described her mutation was very different than most authors do). The writing was quite good and does your 17-year-old self credit. I'm impressed with how well you turned a phrase, even then!
My favourite part of the whole thing was how introspective it was, and the development of Rogue's character throughout the series.
Thanks for sharing.
Melanie
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! I totally agree about there being some definite oddities (and some things that, frankly, don't make all that much sense upon reflection). But it's nice to hear that the narrative and characterization makes up for it. Reading this makes me wonder what I'm getting "wrong" (if you know what I mean) about my second Rogan fic. It'll be interesting to see what I think of the earlier parts when it's finished. :)
Date: 04/09/2009 9:11:25 PM Title: Always On My Mind
If you could see me, you'd know I was giving you a standing ovation.
Loved the pacing, loved the non-theatrics o the developing relationship between Rogue and Logan, the character development and insights of mutants I love like Kurt.
Very clever use of the song titles, btw.
Author's Response: If you could see me, you'd know I was grinning happily. Like this -> :D only bigger.rnrnKurt is my favorite X2 character. X3 totally pulled a Pirates 2, except instead of not letting two black women star in a film (what the hell happened to Annamarie??), they must've thought three blue people in one movie was just too subversive. ;)
Date: 04/09/2009 4:42:34 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road
Awwww. That ending is just... awwww. Logan! Dancing! Happiness! What's not to love? I always get really drawn into your fics. This was just fantastic on every level known to man.
Author's Response: :D I'm so glad the ending's satisfying for you. I can never tell about endings, which is probably why this fic languished in limbo for such an obscene amount of time.
Date: 04/09/2009 4:27:00 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road
wow i noticed just now that you used song titles for all your chapters..the beatles in this one, ac/dc in the last one and...i don't remember who else in the first story. that's very clever actually, i like it.
anyway...it's over now *sniff*; and it's a great ending to a great story =)
i loved how you brought some stuff about america and freedom and all that in there...and the play-doh ;)
and logan in a suit! dancing! ohhh yes!
Author's Response: What a marathon read! Thanks for all your comments! Haha, I'm a real nerd about using song titles for fics. My other series, Dark Side of the Moon, is all based on the Pink Floyd album.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2009 3:31:44 PM Title: Always On My Mind
I think I was reading this last night as fast as you were posting it. Great job!
Author's Response: Ha! Talk about instant gratification. :D Thanks for reading.