yay. you made my Sunday. I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm sure she will come back soon. I wonder what she's been doing in the meantime....

Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, all of your reviews have been great :) The next chapter will be a long one again and will be from Rogue's view so you might get a few insights ;)

Really good chapter :) Great detail, very convincing! and great dialogue between Logan and Storm, when he's questioning her plan at the start.

It's tricky partnering a super-strength comic-book Rogue with Logan because he likes to be the protector, so it's a harder sell when she's tougher than he is and doesn't need protecting..
I look forward to seeing how they work around that!

What did Rogue do? Gah I hate cliff hangers!

Still waters run deep and the rip tide will drag the unsuspecting under.

yay. i loved the new chapter. I love having a new piece of the puzzle each day. It's something I really look forward to. there are so many levels to this story and I can't wait to see how it culminates

Another good chapter :)

I like how you're taking the time to slowly make Rogue start doubting her stance and wavering in her buried feelings for Logan, as opposed to rushing a reconciliation.

Personally though, I think she's being a bitch because she's blaming Logan for ignoring her during his months of grief instead of accepting that he needed the space and waiting it out. I've seen that happen in real life though, people wanting others to get over things pronto so they can get back to paying them the attention they expect.

Weird dream, I'd almost forgotten about the 'diaries' and the 'prophecies'!

Author's Response: Thanks again for the input! I don't want to give to much away but I would say that Rogue isn't as angry as you think with Logan and that her anger actually has nothing to do with his grief, she's admitted that she needs to be mean in order to get through this. There's still more to explore with Rogue and why she's doing what she is doing and like she said, she's just trying to survive what path she is on and in order to do that she has to keep Logan away. There's been little hints here and there, I tried to show in Logan's flashback how Rogue was the only one who understood he needed time to grieve. Not to say Rogue isn't being a bitch at times, I def. like writing her being overly confident and sassy and she is angry with Logan, its just on a more personal level and def. has to do with her own issues that she's yet to fully acknowledge.

What a fun chapter!
Really enjoyed the friendly girl talk between Rogue and Jubilee :)

The snippet on how Rogue got Carol's powers was also enlightening though I'm not sure if I wouldn't have preferred it being divulged through dialogue.

The way 'Mystique gets her kicks' makes me laugh :)

Fun lines:
“And poof, da Gambit was disparu,”
“You should be happy, Rogue, you’ve got the Wolverine riled up, you have your ex-boyfriend being presently emasculated and the X-Men openly presented as fools and you hardly had to lift a finger.”
and the end..
“I told you it was a good idea to get them involved.”
“I’m still waiting on that one to pan out,”

Captivating chapter, very moving, and great dialogue.

I would suggest not translating the French though, either use French or not but don't translate it, or maybe just put the translations right at the end so they don't detract from the flow.

Author's Response: The translation is more of just a personal preference, my French isn't all that great and sometimes when theres a lot of it in a story and its a lengthy piece and the translation isn't until the end I find I've just by passed the dialogue. There won't be a lot of french though so no worries.

Brill chapter!
Loved the way you revealed what had caused Rogue to crash down on the mansion. Great dialogue.

Still keeping up the intrigue..

"She kind of figured Logan himself wasn’t going to be prepared for it if he ever found out his past. Apparently, they had a lot more in common than she’d originally thought."

and now the Cajun showing up looking for more 'diaries' !

Author's Response: Haha Thanks, this chapter was a lot of fun to write, the dialogue comes pretty easy between these two.

Ooh, interesting!

Only thing that made me wonder was why if Logan thinks "Was it a twist of fate that somehow the very thing he’d wanted, had been thinking, had landed literally in his backyard." it hadn't been touched on during his introspective last chapter. I guess that would have ruined the surprise though. Now I'm dying to know where Rogue's been!

Good writing style by the way!

Author's Response: Thanks for the interest. In the first chapter Logan very subtly, extremely subtly references Rogue, I made sure to have a tiny piece of something to tie it in, such as his thoughts on how 'when someone or something doesn't want to be found' but you're right I definitely didn't want to ruin the surprise.

I have not been on here in forever and it has been even longer since I have left a review (very naughty of me, I know). In fact it had been so long I forgot my username and password. However, I had to get on, have my info resent to me so that I could log on to leave a review for this fic.
Holy Crap. Yeah. That's right. That is how much I am loving reading this. I adore your characterization of Rogue. She is badass, vulnerable, sassy, sexy. Such a paradoxal package, really. The tension between Rogue and Logan is palpable...and it is hot! Also, I am seriously enjoying the whole backstory with Rogue and Remy as well (and the jealous tendencies from Logan). When he said to Bobby about picking "vanilla" over Rogue, I laughed out loud. He may be thief but he's not stupid!
I am looking forward to an update VERY soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review and that you took the time to go through all that just to let me know lol I really appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the direction of the characters. I definitely wanted to write a story with a more self-aware Rogue and switch up her and Logan. Logan in this story is partly based on his direction in X3 even though I found the characterization of a lot of characters in that movie was terrible and off, I figured trying a story where he acknowledges that and tries to wake up. And I always wanted someone to call Bobby on the whole Kitty thing, vanilla seemed like the best description in comparison to Rogue. :)

wow !! that was my favorite choater so far. please please please post another chpater tomorrow!!! I love this story so much. such a great plot and wonderful character development. I hope they get toether soon and they clear rhe air. great chapter!

yay another chpater. thanks for something new to read when I should be at work :) please update again soon !

Author's Response: haha I wish I could read some rogan at work. The next chapter will be pretty long, hopefully that will keep you entertained.