The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Loved the story!! Loved that Jean is still a bitch (sorry, what can I say, aside from being a fellow redhead, she has NO redeeming qualities whatsoever) Only criticism is you had a lot of run on sentences, I noticed a LOT of places where a well placed comma or semi colon would have helped the reader along with pacing. It's a small thing, didn't take a lot away from the reading, only wanted to mention it cuz it would have made a great story line even better!
I know it's been a while since you've written anything, but I look forward to seeing you again with new stuff!
Oooohhhkayyy ... The second half of my message disappeared. I added that You don't need to make it any longer, because it is perfect the way it is. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! For both reviews lol. Yeah see I was debating with myself whether I should make a second part but every time I say it might be good this logical part of brain says 'you idiot it ended perfectly don't ruin it by adding more!' So I've decided leaving it as is and pursuing other plot bunnies. But, they seem to not like me much right now though... *grumbles*
Very sweet. I love the ending.
aw great story and what a sweet ending
Author's Response: awww thanks!!rnrnI know it isn't all that perfect but I needed something to help this writers block I've got!!! I've been trying desperately to finish up a few ideas I shot you earlier but they seem to be giving me lots of trouble *sigh* Anyways I'm glad you enjoyed it and whatever I have coming up I'll have better Rogan goodness promise! =D
ohh you posted a new story, i'm so excited! but i've got friends coming over in like 2 minutes so i can't read it now, ugh!! but i can't wait to read this, i'll do it first thing tomorrow morning and review =)