A good beta would have made it easier to read, but this turned out to be worth the effort at deciphering the errors. I like how Logan knew this was a life-changing moment and I was even willing to forgive him for using Mystique as a non-deadly surrogate for Marie -- I mean, hell, his heart was in the right place -- but you turned the tables and let him have the real thing. That one kiss and then 'Marie you have got to promise me. No one gets to touch, no one except me' was almost more satisfying than full-on Rogan sex. Nice job. -- Wendie

If I was Rogue I would have been pissed still, made him work for forgiveness. xXx