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[Report This]Date: 03/29/2010 11:00:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow, that was an intense ending to this chapter.
but she needs to know the whole Wolverine, not just Logan. he's good at hammering that home. she should be scared...but she needs to get brave to be with him.
really enjoying this story and hope you update soon!
[Report This]Date: 03/26/2010 11:34:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue. You've really captured his character
[Report This]Date: 03/25/2010 12:52:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
:-( sadness xXx
Author's Response: sadness? why, u no like chapter or cause end of chapter......don't worry it wil get better, i promise.
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2009 2:53:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Damnit. I wanna read more!
Date: 11/18/2009 9:48:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm really enjoying this, and would like to see where else this goes.
Author's Response: hehehe :D
Date: 11/17/2009 1:31:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
loving this story so far.. sad that she lost her baby.
can't wait to read more.
Date: 10/08/2009 12:16:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
ALLRIGHT PEOPLE!I'M PLANNIN ON ADDIN ANOTHER CHAPTER SOOON, BUT I DONT KNOW WHERE TO START, SO IF YOU WANT MORE U BETTER START BEGGIN ME!
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2009 10:04:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
i just found this story and always love a new spin on the x-movies.
digging it so far!
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2009 5:49:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Aww, he's so sweet. xXx
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2009 2:25:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Other than a few typos here and there, this is really good - do continue, please!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2009 7:08:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good so far, not sure where you are going with the "no pwer" rouge, but a good read and i hope for more
Author's Response: well with rogue having special bracelets that disable her power i think im just gonna keep it that way to keep me happy
Date: 09/07/2009 6:02:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
poor girl. I hate losing babies. it hurts like nothing else. this chapter made me cry.
Author's Response: oh im sry this chapter made u cry, but it will get better, i promise, of course when i update it
Date: 08/12/2009 12:15:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
awww. thats so sad. love that Rogue went looking for Logan. I feel really bad for her though. Hopefully Logan can make everything better. Update soon. Please?
Author's Response: ohh grr i will as soon as i get settled in and have some free time, ive run out of prewritten stuff and know i have to go at it free style, so it will take a little while longer
Date: 06/30/2009 4:57:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is getting pretty intresting. It's been forever since you posted. Keep it up!
Date: 06/30/2009 5:00:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
ohhh great chapter!!! Loved it. I really like how you are having Logan and Marie interact. I like that Logan seemed ok with her pregnancy. I hope they get more than ok with each other soon. LOL anyway I really like this story a lot. On a more grammatical side note, with your improved formatting this chapter is much easier to read than the last 2. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 06/11/2009 12:03:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow. This is really good. I want more of it and I'm wondering if the Xmen are going to make an appearence. I can only imagine them fucking this up for the worse. *grins* Ok, now I want more.
Date: 06/10/2009 4:00:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I can't wait to find out more. So we know she's pregant, I think I'm starting to get an idea of HOW she got that way. But is she happy about it? Hows Wolvie gonna react? So on and so on.
Don't worry about stories taking surprise turns on you. That just means you have strong characters with a life of their own. Which usually leads to the best scenes.
Date: 06/10/2009 1:27:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
ohhh I knew this story was worth sticking around for. I really enjoyed that. I like that you have added some history there for Rogue in the labs and mentioned the bracelets. And wow both Logan AND Marie having nightmares. Thats so fitting I think. Please update soon...
Author's Response: it will be hard to follow up on tht, i have part of my story written down and the last part wasnt, im not sure where to go from there but i'll figure it out
Date: 06/09/2009 6:13:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would give it like a 7 out of 10. Your detailing is good as is you use of tenses and your ability to emote. So far its not so different from the movie so I can't give you points for originality... yet. But your summary gives me enough info to know you are not just going to describe the movie for us... So I look forward eagerly for more. I would however work on your formatting and chapter length. The formatting was a little difficult to read because there are no spaces between the paragraphs. Just hit return once or twice so there is a blank line between the paragraphs. It doesn't seem like much but it makes a vast improvement on readability. As for the chapter length, its a bit short for me. I generally try to get around 1500 words per chapter but as its a personal preference thats not something that like absolutely must be done or something.
Is this review more helpful? Sometimes I forget to be specific. Sorry I wasn't more helpful in my first one.
Date: 06/08/2009 7:22:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Eagerly waiting for more...... Hopefully soon....
Author's Response: what would u rate it so far, this is my first story