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The plot line is great! A beta, proof reader, some punctuation and grammar help would really help the reader...you've got a lot of run on sentences that are hard to break down. But keep up the good work, we don't get better unless we screw up from time to time.
Hey, where is the update? I think this is really goin' very well.
You kono what, this is very interesting story, a good start. The only thing is when the punctuation missing, it is difficult to distinguish where is Rogue's words and where is the main story. Please write some more, what happend after?