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I have officially made today "serafim day" and will spend it settling in and reading this story as slowly and as thoroughly as I can. I remember reading it a while ago, but now that you're updating again, I can't help but invest in this story again.
This deserves a lengthy review for each chapter because it is simply amazing. Really. What you have taken here, the premise of your story is nothing short than mesmerizing and your writing just transcends it. You are extra-ordinary at telling this story - words fail. Really. They fail.
So many parts of this chapter got me breathless but here's a few:
His voice was thick and laden deep with seduction, want, and most importantly command.
This pretty much summed up the first chapter for me. :)
He thought he saw what might have been a very very small uptick of a smile from her, but she just nodded instead.
There she is. I don't think Logan quite understands what he's getting himself into here!
Love it. This is the Wolverine/Logan that I just simply ADORE. :)
Author's Response: I am in awe that you have given me an entire day. I really hope to keep up with your expectations as we go forward. Thank you for taking the time to review each chapter, it is very much appreciated. Have fun picking up your youngest and hopefully I will get chapter 7 done before the 4th of July holiday. :) Thank you again, Alesia
Why did Logan smell like stale sex when he came back from the fights? Is he still sleeping with those fight groupies? I want to be mad at him if he is. lol Great chapter. You really make their relationship have depth. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: White Dove - First, thank you. Second, humm, fight groupies and Logan? We will just have to wait and see. I am glad you still reading. :)
really? well I will be checking it out right now! Thanks for the heads up!
That was really intense. In a good way, of course. Wow. You just keep leaving me wanting more and more. I'm so curious to see how Marie will continue to change Logan. Keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response: Aoria - Thank you. I am glad you can see the changes in Logan. They have a few more things to go through before its all good.
Oh Wow! I was blown away to see an update to this wonderful story, More Please!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I am on a roll and hoping you guys will enjoy it.
Interesting....please finish this and soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Chapter 6 is up, please I would like to hear if it is still interesting.
I like the dark Logan. I like it even more when he shows a bit affection. Be sure to finish this! :)
Author's Response: Don't worry, it is back underway, I will get there if you guys bare with me.
I really really like this story, its in my Top3 or rogan fics (and Ive read hundreds) and wanted to know if you're gonna update it again. I hope you will because it would be a shame for such a nice written story with a wonderful plot to be left unfinished. I hope you still plan on writting it if not pls let us know but I still have hope that you will! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I have another chapter up and am working on chapter 7. I will finish promise!
Hi there,
I'm sure you get a lot of these now a days, with your last update being long ago, but I do hope you haven't given up on this.
For once I have finally seen an author take a completly different slant on the characters need for one another as Im sure you've already have been pointed out by your many, many reviewers.
I love your style, the writing, the language- pretty much everything and so to make this list far shorter Ill tell you the ONE thing Im not really "happy" with. In your later chapers you have Logan call Marie "Little one" about 4 times too much for my personal taste. And I am being completly honest here when I say that is the one and only fault I have found in this story.
I have read and re-read this story more times than I can begin to think to count and everytime still find myself in love with everything that happens, never tiring of this story.
I've put off writing a review to this story for at least a month now due to my view that my review would be a little bit of a generic "omg i love this update plz thx" and I feel that it would have been slightly insulting to your wonderful work so far.
However I do leave this comment as I would really love to see an update. As a rule I NEVER read any stories that have no been marked complete- not even reading the summary in case I find i want to read it- due to the fact so many writers abandon their works half way through- leaving me feeling hurt and unsatified.
I can easily understand that there are indeed MANY MANY circumstances to why such things happen and am never complaining about it- but only wishing to save my own frustration.
However- your story slipped through that net. It called to me in a way I would be knocking on your door right now just to hear the ending I am that in love with it. The characterisation, the plot- EVERYTHING makes me yearn for more and still give me an inkling of hope that you will continue on with this MASTERPIECE of fanfiction.
I sincerly hope I havent offended or upset you, or anyother reviews/readers who stumble upon this and If I have it was not intentional.
Thank you for your time in reading this review and I would love even a word or two to say you have discontinued (which I pray it hasnt) or if you do plan to continue.
Indeed if you have decided to discontinue I would like to say that reading your work has been a great pleasure and I hope that everything with you is well.
And on that note I shall end and await your reply.
Thanks you once again for posting your fanfiction which I have had the great honour to enjoy.
P-i-c x
Author's Response: Partner - First, thank you for your review/note. I am always appreciative of any kind of constructive feedback. Yours and others reviewing after I had been away for so long are part of why I got myself together and posted the next chapter. So thank you for that specifically. rnI do plan on finishing this story. The outline is largely complete. I don't write in order so actually I have a number of scenes that won't happen until much later finished and ready to go. I will finish this story, absolutely.rnI really appreciate your willingness to say something about "little one". I had gotten that feedback from one other person and am glad to know for sure hers wasn't an isolated feeling. I have made some adjustments (taken a few out in already posted chapters) and addressed the issue as a whole in chapter 7. I will be interested to see what your impression of that part of the next chapter is. rnI am TRILLED my story slipped through your no WIP net. I actually have something similar. I will finish this story. The outline is largely completed, I know all of the major plot points, and I have bits written throughout the entire story. It has really been about time and seeing my writing as ‘not a priority’. After so soul searching I have come realize that writing is one of the things that keeps me whole. rnAgain, Partner, thank yourn~Alesiarn
i am rereading this again because i absolutely adore it! when will it be updated again?
Author's Response: Thanks of the review, its updated and I will finish it, I promise.
Really, really just dieing waiting for the next chapter.....This is bar none the most beautifully erotic story I've ever read!I've reread it over and over.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I appreciate knowing you have read it more than once. Chapter 6 is up, I would love to see what you think of it.
I'm fairly new to the Rogan scene, but I've read Anything and aside from it's not continuing I absolutely loved it. I'm so glad you've taken on it's sequel/companion! It's wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank, my main fear is not being able to do Anything justice but I am trying. I think it is required reading in the Rogan fandom. :)
Wow! I did my happy dance when i saw this was updated I loved Anything and this story carries on flawless I don't know how you managed to do it.
Author's Response: SummerSky - Thank you so much, I really am touched about how many people are enjoying this. Chapter 6 should be up soon.
cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks Rogue91, hopefully it won't be long and I will have it up.
I love this side of Logan
Well done on his character
Author's Response: Hellboy - I am ashamed to say how much fun I am having writing the Bastard!Logan, he has unlimited possiblities without his honor to monitor him.
Just found this story and its prequel. I first thought this turns into a only sex fic, but then you began to introduce the pasts of the characters and their traumatas and emotions and that gave the story a twist and somehow plot.
I wonder how old Marie is. You mentioned Logan lost his memory 12 years ago, so Marie should be 14.
I like that Logan wants her to built up her self esteem and noticed how careful he has to be with what he does or says, since she does exactly what he wants (I saw that with the cold shower coming).
He wants to rule every aspect of her, what makes this all rather dark, but still he wants that she is fine (even looking out for her wight). I just wonder that he doesn't seem to care about protecting her from himself - they had a lot of sex and never used a condom. And considering her condition he had picked her up and that she was a virgin (in Anything Marie said 'please don't come in me'), I don't think she was taking the pill.
I wonder how both of them would react if their doings would have consequences. What would a pregnancy do to their slowly building trust and affection?
Please update soon
Author's Response: Desy - Thanks so much for the review. I didn't start to write a fic with as much sex in it as this one has in it but I did want to write a story that the sex continued along with the plot. I hope I am achieving that.rnIn Kristine's notes for 'Anything' she calls Marie 16ish. I have conitnued with that idea. Although I am going to pick at that a little bit in future chapters. I hadn't ever invisioned Marie being 14. I am not sure what Logan's memory has to do with Marie's age (although if you know of a reason they should be linked, please let me know!)rnThere are certainly consequences coming for both Marie and Logan. I would agree with you that she is concerned about pregnancy based on the line from 'Anything'. Both she and Logan have made assumptions about things like pregnancy but have yet to voice those assumptions. Don't worry both the assumptions and consequences are coming.
ooohhhh, sooooo yummy! ME WANT!
This story shows another possible way of what could have happened without going off character. I mean, it’s Logan, he’s not an average “hero” he’s crossing the line between good and evil all the time. He’s got honor but he’s also a man with animal instincts, and after taking so much bullshit I totally buy that he decided to act that way with Marie, claiming her as his own. So, I personally like the fact this is not like the 98% of stories out there showing a caring perfect Logan but show us something else.
Ok about this chapter…I loved it!!! You write soooo well you make of this a masterpiece. I truly like the dynamic between them, they are starting to feel at ease with each other (under Logan’s strict rules, of course) and it amuses me how Marie is agreeing with everything Logan says. I loved when she was scared that something could happen to him in the fight circuit, that was cute. I also like that he treats her in a sweet way but at the same time he’s harsh and pretty much a prick; “And darlin, I am going to fuck you as many ways as I want, however many times as I want. And you, my sweet tasty girl, are going to come as many times as I let you.” I would be scared to death if a guy like that said that to me lol, but the fact Marie enjoys their sexual encounters even after that, and also asks about that statement makes their relationship more complex and exiting. She really needs Logan and she’s willing to please him in exchange for his affection and protection and now it seems she’s kinda falling for him, the whole concept is great!
Oh I must make a mention to the smut part, simply HOT! You describe everything so well with a perfect pacing, superb!
Please pleeeease I beg you update soon!!!! Thanks :)
Author's Response: Annie - Oh my goodness thank you so much for your feedback. I am really flattered that you like this Logan. They have so much still to learn about each other still it is going to be interesting to see exactly where their feelings end up. (I actually haven't decided yet.)
First alesia, i would like to commend on your superb writing skills; you have a very compelling way of portraying the dynamics of both characters and in an engaging way too. that is truly amazing given the fact that I've been throwing a fit coz logan is treating rogue like someone who does not have sense or an idiot. Having said that, i think logan is in for a rude awakening. why?
1. lets not forget that rogue is one of the few most powerful mutants who is capable of killing logan. so should she fill that there is no need for logan's "protection", she has the power but figuratively and literally to just walk away. The way i see it, rogue is the one who is using logan rather than him her. He may be deluding himself that he is the one who is dominating but i think is/has started seeing that the is a spark there (we all know that a spark in a room full of gas is all u need to create an explosion). i just saying that rogue seems like she is just bidding her time to heal from her traumatic experience in the lab bcoz just think of it; psychological we are all programmed to survival and right now given rogues situation were she has no alternative, she is been smart to stick with someone capable of satisfying her basic needs (food, safety, shelter and sex) plus she doesn't necessarily need to do much in return (symbiotic).
2. Given the state of her powers, rogue has felt incomplete coz of her inability to touch. Now she can, she is using it to her satisfaction. Rogue is quite a good judge of character and perceptive that’s why I think one of the minor reasons she consented to this idea of being owned by logan not to mention her slight attraction to him.
3. logan is a self assured dick who things just bcoz he heals and has enhanced senses that he can intermediate and impose his will on every/anyone and they conform to him. I don’t think so. I'm sure he will come to realize that rogue is called 'rogue' for a reason. I just get the feeling that she is purposely agreeing to certain things (rules can be bent and twisted just like in chapter 4 'bout the shower). I feel this is also away to stay on his good side and keep in on a kind of leash.
Last but not least she has not told him her powers yet right? I have a feeling its bcoz she has a suspicion that he is with holding information from her and she he ask she would likely tell him only one aspect of her powers (personality and mutation absorption) without mentioning the memories, thoughts, emotions and life aspect bcoz she would still want to have something at her disposal so as to not be caught unawares by anyone including logan. All in all, in my opinion, rogue is the PASSIVE Manipulator while logan just having Alpha male complex. (LOL)
Author's Response: Natsuki - WOW!! What wonderful feedback. You raise some hugely interesting questions and theories. I love it when both reading and reviewing spawn additional theories and ideas. I went back and looked at "Anything", which is what starts this story. I am going to have to think about how much Marie really told Logan about her mutation. It is certainly an intreguing idea. At this point I am not sure Marie knows that she has the ability and inner strength to be a Rogue.
Brilliant as usual. xXx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Oh, YAY!!!!! You're back with this story. And what a chapter, with some great, HOT smut. I have to admit I'm with White Dove that the whole thing makes me a bit uncomfortable, but I don't really mind being made to feel uncomfortable ;-) Because hey, what's the point of writing fiction if you're too afraid to ruffle a few feathers on the way? My mum put it best when she said that fiction is meant to comfort the unsettled and unsettle the comfortable. So keep going, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Blue - Thank you soo very much for the review!! I am glad this Logan makes you uncomfortable, he should, shouldn't he? I mean he is basically a ruthless bastard, right? I haven't quite decided if he will ever be anything more so I can't guarentee he won't stay a bastard. :) BTW your mum is brillant, I love that statement.
Thank you sooooo much for updating!!! This is really one of my all time faves! I can't wait to read this chapter!!! (its 4 am and I must go to sleep now but reading this will be the first thing I do tomorrow - so expect another review from me) Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Ok Just read all 5 chapters. For some reason this story makes me uncomfortable. It is well written and really evokes a response in the reader. My reaction comes from the fact that I don't like How Logan treats Rogue. I hate that he wants to use her as a substitute for Jean. I would rather he be acting like he is just because he wants Marie. To me this is kind of a slight to Marie. I am not used to Logan being so unfeeling about Marie's feelings as well. I love the Logan that Cares more about how she feels than anything else in the world.
Author's Response: White Dove - First, thank you for expressing you feelings about being uncomfortable with the story. I know in other fandoms it is often frowned upon to give less than glowing feedback, so thank you very much having the courage to doing so. Secondly, I agree with you. I don't know that you are really supposed to like how Logan treats Rogue at this point. (Have you read "Anything" yet?) Remember is a rather Dark!Logan. He is doing exactly what you say at this point, he is using her as a substitute for Jean (to an extent). This Logan doesn't know who Rogue/Marie is yet. He doesn't know all of the reasons he should care about her for herself (yet). What is interesting about Dom/sub relationships is that in those it is the sub with all of the power and it the sub who is the absolute center of the Dom's world when they are in a scene together. It is the Dom's primary responsibility to care for (and not just in a sexual way) and cater to (again not just in a sexual way) the needs of the sub. Now, while in this story Logan and Marie aren't in a true D/s relationship (we are missing safewords, limits, etc), they are darn close, or at least that is what I am going for. So all that said, you are right; Logan isn't doing what he is supposed to be doing - he is not caring for Marie's needs (and again I say yet). However, I not really sure this Logan knows how (yet). There is more to the whys and whats of Logan's relationship (if you really want to call it that) with Jean than we know up to this point, which might shed some light on why Logan is acting the way his is now. Also part of this journey is about both Logan and Marie discovering how they are supposed to relate to each other. (Marie is mentally stronger than she looks, which this Logan should know by now.) Without getting too far into what is to come, I will just say I love happy endings, am a big sap, and really hate angst - if that tells you anything about where we might end up. :) I would love it if you hang with me for a few more chapters there are things coming that I would really love to hear your perspective on. Again thanks for reading and even more thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.
Author's Response: White Dove - First, thank you for expressing your feelings about being uncomfortable with the story. I know in other fandoms it is often frowned upon to give less than glowing feedback, so thank you very much having the courage to doing so. Secondly, I agree with you. I don't know that you are really supposed to like how Logan treats Rogue at this point. (Have you read "Anything" yet?) Remember is a rather Dark!Logan. He is doing exactly what you say at this point, he is using her as a substitute for Jean (to an extent). This Logan doesn't know who Rogue/Marie is yet. He doesn't know all of the reasons he should care about her for herself (yet). What is interesting about Dom/sub relationships is that in those it is the sub with all of the power and it the sub who is the absolute center of the Dom's world when they are in a scene together. It is the Dom's primary responsibility to care for (and not just in a sexual way) and cater to (again not just in a sexual way) the needs of the sub. Now, while in this story Logan and Marie aren't in a true D/s relationship (we are missing safewords, limits, etc), they are darn close, or at least that is what I am going for. So all that said, you are right; Logan isn't doing what he is supposed to be doing - he is not caring for Marie's needs (and again I say yet). However, I not really sure this Logan knows how (yet). There is more to the whys and whats of Logan's relationship (if you really want to call it that) with Jean than we know up to this point, which might shed some light on why Logan is acting the way his is now. Also part of this journey is about both Logan and Marie discovering how they are supposed to relate to each other. (Marie is mentally stronger than she looks, which this Logan should know by now.) Without getting too far into what is to come, I will just say I love happy endings, am a big sap, and really hate angst - if that tells you anything about where we might end up. :) I would love it if you hang with me for a few more chapters there are things coming that I would really love to hear your perspective on. Again thanks for reading and even more thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.
Author's Response: White Dove - First, thank you for expressing your feelings about being uncomfortable with the story. I know in other fandoms it is often frowned upon to give less than glowing feedback, so thank you very much having the courage to doing so. Secondly, I agree with you. I don't know that you are really supposed to like how Logan treats Rogue at this point. (Have you read "Anything" yet?) Remember is a rather Dark!Logan. He is doing exactly what you say at this point, he is using her as a substitute for Jean (to an extent). This Logan doesn't know who Rogue/Marie is yet. He doesn't know all of the reasons he should care about her for herself (yet). What is interesting about Dom/sub relationships is that in those it is the sub with all of the power and it the sub who is the absolute center of the Dom's world when they are in a scene together. It is the Dom's primary responsibility to care for (and not just in a sexual way) and cater to (again not just in a sexual way) the needs of the sub. Now, while in this story Logan and Marie aren't in a true D/s relationship (we are missing safewords, limits, etc), they are darn close, or at least that is what I am going for. So all that said, you are right; Logan isn't doing what he is supposed to be doing - he is not caring for Marie's needs (and again I say yet). However, I not really sure this Logan knows how (yet). There is more to the whys and whats of Logan's relationship (if you really want to call it that) with Jean than we know up to this point, which might shed some light on why Logan is acting the way his is now. Also part of this journey is about both Logan and Marie discovering how they are supposed to relate to each other. (Marie is mentally stronger than she looks, which this Logan should know by now.) Without getting too far into what is to come, I will just say I love happy endings, am a big sap, and really hate angst - if that tells you anything about where we might end up. :) I would love it if you hang with me for a few more chapters there are things coming that I would really love to hear your perspective on. Again thanks for reading and even more thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.
OH YAH! Thank you for adding the next chapter. I can't tell you how much I love this story. My inner smut demoness is purring in delight. Your detail is fabulous and the pacing is perfect. And the sex scenes are just hawt hawt hawt! Thank you x 1,000,000!
Author's Response: Jnet - you are too kind. I was working on chapter 6 this week, which I didn't think would have any sex in it and well it looks like it maybe all sex so I am glad you like that part cause there is more coming! (ooh, bad pun).
I was so happy to see the update for this story, and even happier after reading it! More soon please.....
Author's Response: Don't worry, it will come. I actually have a good part of chapter 6 typed and beta read which is always the problem for me.