Will u be updating this fanfiction?

Amazing fic, I know it's going to drive me nuts thinking about what else could have happened in this story. Damn unfinished stories!!

Okay...This story severely disturbs me and makes me want more. I want more so I can see their relationship grow into something so special that no one can touch it. Which is what they have always had, but in this particular story they start out in a much different point in their relationship at first.

Which brings me to the point that I am horrible disturbed by Logan's mistreatment of Marie.. I crawl with the knowledge that he is using her.. the one man that didn't judge or terrorize her and here he is basically forcing her to have sex... I cannot say how disturbing that is for me and I keep hoping he will make it more about them and less about, well sex.

The Rogue/Marie we all know and love would shatter at the knowledge Logan could use her that way without any feelings about her other than she is his possession.. An object is how I feel Logan is using her right now, not a person just a thing.. I don't know if I could ever see Logan being this way, honor or no. His conscious would catch up with him eventually and then he would feel utter revoltion at his behavior, although I couldn't see him stopping I know he would at least have a much bigger inner conflict.

I guess it is just the fact that it feels more like Marie is an object than a person when I read their interactions.. It creeps me out. Sure Logan is definitely a rough sex type of guy and I could totally see him being domineering in the bedroom, but near abusive...nah I couldn't see him that way with or without his honor. Even wolves treat there mates better than that and yes I mean mates.

Wolves will only claim, as Logan has with Marie, one mate and from that point on that is it. They treat them with respect, love, protection. Of course I don't expect Logan to be purely animalistic and not think or want other women (case in point Jean-the bitch) at first anyway. I don't know I'm just expecting a climb in their relationship from owner - object-sex to best friends-lovers-mates. Not right away like I said, but the pattern currently in place needs some change, even if it is subtle. I find myself wanting to rip Logan's face off and wonder where the hell his mind or even heart went... Grrr. Yes I did just growl.. lol

Anyway, your writing style is lovely, I just hope that sometime soon their relationship takes a turn upward instead of the constant feeling he is just using her and not valuing her past she is his possession-object.. It is so degrading and doesn't need to be, even if Logan threw his honor out the window. The sex is great and all, but there needs to start being some substance, especially after they begin on the road and into all the trouble they have to face together. Case in point the link to the video below makes me think of what their relationship could be. Over all great writing style and I hope I did not offend it was not my intention. I just hope that if you come back to this story progression on their relationship starts.. somehow.

LINK: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TetxEjIrgdo

I've read this like a half a dozen times, I wish you would update x-( its been over a year. I was glad to see some development in Rogue's character and her questioning Logan and the process of her acceptance

Just discovered this, so sad there wasn't more, but had such a great time reading it, I enjoy dark rogan :) great job!

Hmmmm poke poke! Please don't tell me this has been forgotten, it's one of my favourite fics (even unfinished) but I really really wanna see how it turns out!!! Pretty please?! With sugar on top? :D

Please I beg of you to write more and please finish this. I love it so much, it's my favorite fanfic ever (and trust me I've read a lot) and this is my favorite Logan and Marie ever. Please please please, if you do I'll write a review on every chapter of every one of your stories, I promise! But only if you finish this story!

HAVE MERCY!! Update faster please!!

Whoo hooo!!!!! Somehow this latest update slipped past me until now. Made my day, Loved it, can't wait for more!!!!!

I love this story and am so glad to see that you updated. I can't wait to read more of this!

I can't believe it's been over a year since you updated as I love this story and can't wait to read more. Please keep writing, this story is H-O-T hot!

You know what would be a great Christmas present to your readers? Getting an update out before the New Year! Pllllleeeeeaaaassssee? lol. Merry Christmas!

Wow. Wow. First off, thanks for the dedication in your chapter. I don't see how my story could even hold a candle to this, but glad you found it inspiring in some way =D.

Okay, so I had to go back and read Kristine's 'Anything' and it was close enough to non-con to be pretty squicky for me. That made me reluctant to continue on with your story at first...

But damn, am I glad I did. There were still a couple of parts that were tough to read. But you really managed to 'humanize' this dark Logan. His motivations, while sometimes disturbing, are understandable and very real, y'know?

And aside from the INSANELY melt-your-computer-screen-hot sex scenes, (literally, hottest fic I've ever read, hands-down), this story is really psychologically compelling, too. The balance of power between these two is so intriguing; I mean, sure, Logan is dominant, no doubt about that, but I don't think he even realizes just how much he's getting himself wrapped around Marie's finger. It's already clear he'd do just about anything to keep her safe and cared for.

Marie's backstory was great. I still feel that Logan has somewhat taken advantage of this young vulnerable girl's situation and blah blah (and you've brilliantly shown moments where he feels those twinges of guilt too, which I appreciate). But at the same time, she's getting things she wants/needs out of their relationship, and she's weighed her options and made the very clear-headed choice to stay.

Sorry if this review didn't completely make sense. I'm still a little shell-shocked from reading most of this in one sitting. But uh, to sum up: Wow. Hot. More. Soon. Please. I can't even imagine what's going to happen when/if Logan takes her back to Westchester, but I'm sure it will be an Uh-mazing read.