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Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 3:19:02 PM Title: Reptile

This chapter was beautifully written and I love the whole scene on the shore. It’s a perfectly placed ‘pause for breath’ before more of the hard stuff. Brilliant. x

Author's Response: Thanks! now finish breathing and get back to work on "Dare Me" woman!

Reviewer: Ella Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 1:32:11 PM Title: Reptile

I agree with everyone else's comments. This story has been dark and sensual, but somewhere along the line they started to feel for each other. It's inevitable. There is something amazingly compatible between those two: his inner beast, her being 'poison'. But, their never-ending sense of loyalty and honor - isn't that what makes us love Rogan pairings so much? At the end of it all, it’s Wolverine and Rogue, and then the rest of them. Good job, keep going!

Author's Response: thanks! their compatibility was something i couldn't get away from, that if two people like this existed in real life they would both be tortured sods with screwed up outlooks on life, only Wolverine might be more mature about the struggle Rogue is going through, having been there himself and still fighting it every day.
rnrnnow i just need to figure out where the heck to go from here LOL!

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 12:13:56 PM Title: Reptile

WOW! that took my breath away. I think it was refreshing to have some real emotional issues after everything else. I look forward to see their dynamic change in the next chapters. Really beautiful story as always!

Author's Response: thanks! i was so unsure about this new tone to their relationship, but they pulled me inextricably to something more genuine and less brutal than before. i like it, but have to admit i am soooo stumped right now where they will go from here. I was enjoying the evilness, so now I have to figure out how to keep that hard edge going even though they're changing.rn

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 11:35:45 AM Title: Reptile

Their first real kiss...maybe they will eventually both win at this game. Loved this chapter, even though you said all this patience and gentleness won't last forever. It's sort of like a moment of comic relief in a really suspenseful movie; you have to have that now and then to break the tension, in order to be able to build it back up again, 'cause its the up-and-down, up-and-down, that makes the roller coaster ride so much fun. -- Wendie

Author's Response: whew! glad someone felt this chapter wasn't some weird fluke after all that angst and evil. i like the way you said it. yeh, i just needed to cut some of the ever rising tension before someone died or something LOL!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 9:09:39 AM Title: Reptile

I love this chapter. They're both finally beginning to learn. xXx

Author's Response: yeh, at some point there had to be something under all that bitterness and lust or they'd really be as another reviewer put it "soul dead trash."

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 7:20:11 AM Title: Reptile

Awwww those two can be so nice if they want to.

Author's Response: yeh, but nice apparently only when they've been drive near to the point of self-destruction.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 3:14:13 PM Title: Leech

I love your Rogue, so out of control and dangerous! It was clear (and very cleverly done) that she had Logan pumping through her veins in the DR scene. And speaking of which, the whole DR scene was amazingly well written – very entertaining. I’m eagerly awaiting more…

Author's Response: thanks! i've never written a lot of action before and struggled with it, trying to keep from saying "he hit, she it, it hit, they hit, etc." glad the inner Wolverine was clear without being smack in the face obvious!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 3:11:19 PM Title: Leech

I really like the games that Wolverine and Rogue are playing ;)

Author's Response: heh heh me too, seems like everyone wins and loses at the same time though!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 6:09:26 AM Title: Leech

Rogues so crazy xXx

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 11:55:04 PM Title: Leech

This is Rogue. This is Rogue drunk on everyone's powers. Any questions? (OK, who's old enough to remember that PSA from the Partnership for a Drug Free America?)

Thank goodness for Scott's little 'intervention' or her binge leeching could have led to even more trouble.
Wonder what the Wolverine is gonna say when he finds out about this?

More, please.

Peace,
Wendie

Author's Response: hey wendie, thank for the feedback. yes, she's getting hooked on draining powers b/c her hits of Wolverine are a combination of sexual lust and mutation intoxication. who wouldn't find that addictive?! c'mon the man is fiiiiiiiiine and his powers are luscious! and it's all fueled by her own rage at her cruel mutation and how she can only hurt those she touches. who wouldn't wind up twisted with a power like that? someone had to intervene in the DR sim (Cuyke naturally) or my dark plot bunny was going to make her kill someone. despite how dark and cruel Rogue is in this story i couldn't let her do that. wolverine's reaction-and more smexiness-to come in the next chapter in a few days.

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 10:22:40 PM Title: Leech

wow. I'm really conufsed:) but also intrigued. I'm looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: no worries, i hope to answer any questions about her strange behavior in this chapter in the next chapter that will be posted in a few days. intrigued is good, it means i haven't spilled all the secrets yet!

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 7:56:04 PM Title: All the Love in the World & The Hand that Feeds

"Author's Response: i really have to go finish "The Only One Who Can" soon b/c I stopped right when the smut should've occurred but i chickened out." I totally agree I'm dying for the next chapter of that one. :) But I'm loving this one as well. I can't wait to see what reactions everyone has once they realize how much Logan is in Rogue, or if they even realize that Logan HAS been in Rogue.

Author's Response: i know, i know i need to finish TOOWC! but for some reason i love it so much i'm being a complete wuss about "finishing" it with some sex. maybe i won't end it there and will just let it unwind some more, like this one. i originally meant for this one to be just 4 chapters, but the characters wouldn't leave me alone and demanded more! and good catch on no one knowing yet that Logan has been drained by the Rogue (in several ways LOL!). i've got a couple of ideas for that reveal, haven't decided on which one yet. next chapter should be a biggie though! glad you like it!

Reviewer: tdawnm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 8:10:34 AM Title: The Closet

Love it. And I am not above 'feeding the beast', either. ;)
I don't know what it is about the evo version fo these two, but I do enjoy a bit of rough, I wont lie. ;)

I don't know if you've heard the singer 'Poe', but she has a song that reminds me of this series, called 'Wild'. I just heard it on Saturday and it made me think of you. ;) You'll have to check it out.
Of course, it's no NIN. ;)

Please continue. :D It's pretty awesome. ;)

Author's Response: i plan to have the next chapter up no later than wednesday night. things take a turn...dunno if it will be dark or light, the lot bunny is pulling in both directions. but more smuttiness i promise. then i might get back to a plot LOL!

Reviewer: Ms_H_Wallbanger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 10:59:25 PM Title: The Closet

Christ on a cracker I love this story! You, missy, are getting VERY good at writing smut! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: hee hee, i never thought i had it in me, but once i busted the smut cherry apparently i'm addicted. which reminds me i really have to go finish "The Only One Who Can" soon b/c I stopped right when the smut should've occurred but i chickened out.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 12:27:38 PM Title: The Closet

Amazingly hot writing! Wow!

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 11:11:45 AM Title: All the Love in the World & The Hand that Feeds

This has made me want to check out x-men Evolution cause I've only seen the movies but loving this version of Rogue. Talk about taking it to Wolverine

Author's Response: if you wanna see the Evolution episodes online, i know a site that has all 4 seasons. http://www.anilinkz.com/category/x-men-evolution/ rnrnno ads. i love this site!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 8:42:27 AM Title: The Closet

HOT stuff. lol I'd write more but I'm going for a cold shower. xXx

Author's Response: i tend to light a cigarette myself LOL!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 3:28:51 AM Title: The Closet

HOT!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 2:11:03 AM Title: The Closet

Yowza! Who knew sex without skin to skin contact could be so hot? I love the creative ways you've found to accomplish this deed without her having lost or controlled her mutation. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: y'know often i find myself more into the stories where she has control for all that lovely skin-to-skin contact, but for some reason the idea of not letting her have that ability fit well with this story, which centers around pain and anger. i am seriously rethinking my previous opinion that the silk-scarf stories aren't as hot as the bare skin ones. the clothed stories lend so much kink LOL!

Reviewer: Sakashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 7:43:59 PM Title: No Song

Guughhhhh
So much can come from this. So. Very. Much.
So much anger from both of them. Still not to sure if it's going to end in some sort of slightly happy ending [although, knowing them, there's no such thing as a 'happy ending'] or if someone is going to end up dead.
...
And that's the way I like it. :3

Author's Response: i just had a slightly less evil plot bunny jump onto the one in charge of this story and hump it madly. the result is an idea that just MIGHT make them less god awful, but we'll see what unfolds as i write.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 11:17:28 AM Title: No Song

Still loving it, so glad you’ve decided to add more to this. Can’t wait…! x

Author's Response: next chapter should be up no later than Wednesday.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 11:16:28 AM Title: No Song

um ok

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 8:28:16 AM Title: No Song

Worth the agonising wait. xXx

Author's Response: heh heh, they do love to bring the agony.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 3:19:15 AM Title: No Song

Well Wolvie you got yourself a hellion there with Rogue ;)

Author's Response: yeh, she's pretty horrible isn't she?

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 1:28:29 AM Title: No Song

this story is a little like a train wreck; I know I should look away, but I just can't.

Without a doubt, this is one of the most delicious guilty pleasures I've ever read. Generally, I don't like my Rogan this dark, but when it's this well-written, it does have an enormous appeal. Mmm! Mmm! Good!

Peace, (standard sign-off, but after what I just read, it actually made me laugh as I typed it)
Wendie

Author's Response: LOL@peace. yeh, there's no peace in this for either of them! thank you for complimenting my writing style, that means a lot, not just that you liked the storyline. this story's designed to push the envelope of what we often see on this site. i just really wanted to do something different from a lot of the amazing stories i've read here b/c it allows me to try what i hope are original ideas that haven't been explored much before. i hope to have a somewhat less hateful ending for these two, but it all depends on where my dark plot bunny muse takes me.

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