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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 1:06:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! :D

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 5:18:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

"I'm telling you kid, you got two choices, you follow me right now and I'm gonna wash that color from your hair and then make you a woman..."Good GODS....YES!!!

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 10:50:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very real most of us have done that to our hair to get the guy you like to notice and lol funny

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 2:40:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very well done. Very sexy and funny at the same time.

Great lines: 'So you dressed up like Jean? Hoping I would take you home and touch you like you need?'
Love that he knows she 'needs' this, needs him--it's not a game; it's real.

Best lines: 'And did you think I would just let you go once I had you? Did you think that I would let you just walk away after knowing how we fit together?'
Logan has obviously thought about this before--A LOT, but probably never believed she would ever reach out to him, at least not like this.

Personally, I'd love to see Logan actually washing her hair, followed by him making good on his promise--Yummy!

Peace,
Wendie

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 5:09:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good one!

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 3:28:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked this...it made me smile. x

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2009 11:50:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great closing line!

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