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just found this story after you put two new chapters up.
eeewww, gross father gross!
hope Wolverine slices and dices him later in the series!
must go to read the rest, like 9 more chappies to absorb and love!
A good, long, HOT shower, definitely. But it seems to be the way Marie's father is usually written, so it's not that huge a surprise. You've written him so perfectly evil, it'll be good to see how Logan takes care of him!!
I'm right there with you on the shower thing. Eeew.
Not a direction I would have picked, but hey, whatever works.
Despite the punctuation issues, this is very well-written. Very creepy, excellent word pictures.
Peace,
Wendie